Reviews for Gray
levi2000a1 chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
Good chapter. I like how Ron is showing some backbone with Betty but worried that he still doesn't have faith in himself or Kim in being able to deal with college.

The only flaw I see IMHO is near the end. "Ron was good at hearing the impending doom too. "KP, you can be honest with me," Ron said weakly."
You set it up for "Something," that Ron heard and I didn't read, and then let it drop.
CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Quite the mystery of the mission, Drakken's plans and their own futures...

levi2000a1 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Good first chapter. Kinda sorry that things just went on as if the invasion never happened , but hey, you can't have frosting on every strudel.