Reviews for Serpentine Rewrite
KatherineDarkQueenRiddle666 chapter 4 . 2/15/2014
I loved it please update more
NotJustOneFandome chapter 4 . 10/3/2012
Please update this, this is good story.
WereBunny87 chapter 4 . 9/12/2012
Awww so sad! I'm so happy with this chapter (even if it's bittersweet lol!) and I look forward to more hon! Great job! (and was that a hint of Voldie we got to see? Bwahaha!) I hope things work out for little Harry :3 -cough- I mean Zephyr xD (I love that name by the way!)
Mioki chapter 3 . 9/9/2012
Your story is really amazing! I can't wait for more! ;D
slashslut chapter 3 . 9/9/2012
i like evan already! really looking forward to reading how this fic develops!
WereBunny87 chapter 3 . 9/9/2012
Oh man I'm really glad you re-wrote this (in the process of? Lol!)
I look forward more! Great job!
Nana707 chapter 3 . 9/8/2012
It's nice to see you rewriting and continuing this story of yours. Its been a while since I read the original version, so this feels like I'm reading a whole new story. I look forward to where you are going with this and wish you the best.

On a sidenote, the line 'got to eat to live, got to steal to eat' made me think of the Disney movie Aladdin. For the rest if the chapter and the two following it I had Arabian music playing in my head with the voice of Genie making comments every now and then. Fun stuff, that.