|Reviews for Longing|
| covenmama chapter 64 . 12m ago
I'm excited to see where this goes! Who stepped out of the forest? Hopefully not Maria!
| Nyx Nuit chapter 64 . 2h ago
Dun dun duuuun!
| Twilightfan1101 chapter 64 . 2h ago
OMG! This is getting gooooddd :-D Can't wait for the next update. Please don't make us wait soo long.. I need to know what happens next asap. Its gonna bug me until then.
| NatalieLynn chapter 64 . 2h ago
Maria? Savannah? Those are the only two I could see him referring to as his own personal nightmare. Anyway, this was a jam-packed chapter! Those adoption papers threw her for a loop. Whose idea was it to hang the mistletoe up every which where? That was SO not subtle. Then Rose piping up asking if she's ever had an orgasm?! That as a tad inappropriate for mixed company, let alone on Christmas Day as the whole family is gathered to celebrate. The gifts they exchanged were much better exchanged in private, especially when they almost led to a kiss. Damn Carlisle's rotten timing! :) I hope you get them there soon. Bella's waking up with multi-colored hair was pretty wild, especially triggering the bleeding again like that. I was wondering if anyone did notice any of the smells of blood, bleach, alcohol, burnt cloth, etc. Even with the windows open and candles going, I would expect some to linger, especially from the blood-soaked pillow. Great chapter all the way through!
| An Avid Reader Forever chapter 64 . 3h ago
great chapter.I loved all the present giving. and the hair colour change was great.
| tayaboo72 chapter 1 . 3h ago
Great chapter I can't believe Carlisle interrupted Bella and Jasper's kiss. I love the Wildfire necklace so sweet and cute, and I thijk it's a great idea that they want to adopt bella . I think the person is one of Jaspers ex lovers can you imagine a jealous Bella. Bella should just them everything.
| la.shayma16 chapter 62 . 4h ago
sorry i meant wriTing
| la.shayma16 chapter 64 . 4h ago
If it's that Bitch Maria or anyone from the southern wars I'm righting an angry letter
| SarahhIonaa chapter 64 . 4h ago
this chapter was amazing! can't wait until the next update :)
| lavieenrose01 chapter 64 . 5h ago
happy birthday to you :) this chapter was awesome , bella shared one thing about herself which i consider an improvement but i did feel sorry about what happened to her first thing in the morning , that was one hell of a way to wake up !
and i bet that was maria that showed up at the end though i find it weird that she would leave her territory ?_?
| YunaNeko chapter 64 . 6h ago
Love It! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!
UPDATE SOON! GOOD LUCK!:D
| Estel Ashlee Snape chapter 64 . 6h ago
Good chapter. Keep up the good work!
| Holidai chapter 64 . 7h ago
Oh wow, this chapter was so, so good. I know I say that every time but every time you leave me breathless and so it needs to be said. Is Maria there? Woo. I hope they are able to neutralize her. I want to hug Bella (and Jasper) in the worst of ways. I wonder if Bella will be there when they return or if she will have bounced. I really love the way you bring enough emotion and joy into a chapter to counteract the heavy parts, it is greatly appreciated. Thank you for the update, I shall wait calmly and quietly for the next but do know I am quite eager. ;)
| suesacrab chapter 64 . 7h ago
Thank you for your hard work on that chapter. I love the drawings. Great idea.
| cathy29jes chapter 64 . 7h ago
argg Carlisle prevented Jasper and Bella kissing, Jasper should leave the phone behind him when he goes to see Bella
Bella knows that the Cullens want her to stay in their lives, but is that Bella will accept, though it would be a good solution, Bella drags plenty of pots, but the Cullens are not the type to get noticed, and because she would be safe,
Now it seems that Maria tretrouvé Jasper, it would be better that she left alone because Bella's face it beautiful, if Jasper has problem, Maria will realize that the little human could be more dangerous that it,