|Reviews for Blasphemy|
| Puddles21 chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
I love your take on Starbuck, there should be more Starbuck fan fiction. The line about carrying the gun is great. Thanks for sharing
| Onlyindreams145 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
love your work
| Dan Sickles chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
This was a great beginning for your new account! You enter Starbuck's mind and really show that you understand him from the inside out. I like the way you reveal his values system, his kindness and his compassion. I think it's true that Starbuck is more afraid of lawlessness and of acting outside the law than he is of dying. And I also think you're right about his reasons for only wanting to kill Ahab in his sleep.
The only line I would change is the one about the "ebbing" madness in Ahab's eyes. I think it is actually increasing as time goes on!