Reviews for Forgotten clue
SACHIN1495 chapter 13 . 11/16/2013
fantabulous story...story acha tha n maya aaya padne. Bt which clue did daya forget? Did i miss something...
Anonymous chapter 13 . 6/4/2013
Hey. I have just seen this site and i dont know its functions. I even dont know that will this review reach u. But still.
Um i am really very sorry but i didnt like the last part where daya gets up covered with sweat and abhijeet is guilty.
So its a humble request could you please change the ending to something sweeter and more reliving.

And also i wanted to ask u that i was reading one of your story where abhi-daya wanted to buy a home at j niwas. I read the last story mission for frieds dream. But they still dont buy the house at the end of that story. Are there anymore sequels to that story. If not will you please make one..
Guest chapter 13 . 5/24/2013
i dont like muskan or even any other girls come close to daya.i always wanted him to be free that my imaginations can fly story was too good and expect more from you.
MissCID chapter 13 . 12/24/2012
Awesome story...
Writing more stuff like this
anjalimahajan chapter 13 . 12/11/2012
ummmaaaah ummmaaah...its 4 u for this fabuls story
Daya sir forget memory of past seven days n he fight wid himself to remember wt happen in those days bt can't able...n he goes 2 hospital for electric shock...he can't sleep... n open eyes in jerk coz of the those days which he spent in close room...all is very very osm n emotional 2
Thank u so much for post this Fantastic story 4 us
Plzz write more stories like this...
YAMNA chapter 13 . 10/8/2012
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz end this story in minimuim 2 chapters coz i can't able to read it more but as u know that if we know the starting so we are thinking again that what will happen next?
ALIZA chapter 3 . 10/6/2012
its a good idea that what ever is happened with abhijeet (memory loss) is now with daya but thanx not to make this a worst story if daya forget abhijeet i can't even imagine that
plz write more stories on abhirika and dayuskan togeather (romance/little fight/friendshp)
DF-Daya's Daredevil chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Hey thank u guys fro ur liking... Thanks from bottom of my heart

thanks for ur support as well
Guest chapter 13 . 10/2/2012

you always write stories on abhijeet and daya and how close their friendship is. But today i was wondering if somebody could write a story with a big arguement of abhi and daya.

friends have arguements and it just makes their friendship stronger

if u have time can u write one like that plz
Duo forever chapter 13 . 10/2/2012
i tend to read your stories and i have always loved the, and this one has loved up to my expectation. I think you are a wonderful writer and i hope u write more stories. The way you portray abhijeet and dayas friendship is just amazing, nobody can do it better than you.

I do agree with you that writing on this forum should not risk your profession or health. May god bless you and you keep writing.

Just a little request, when you are free can you write some more special duo movements. I do hope you continue to write more and that Sony firworks will be inspired from you.

As again you are amazing and we all readers love reading ur stories... :)
Guest chapter 13 . 10/1/2012
your story was awsome...keep writing more stories like this one..!
dayaforu chapter 13 . 9/30/2012
GD Jony is an aggressive person by default... The way he takes money from ACP sir is a proof of his brilliantness... If that Xerox machine clue does not given by Dr Niyati cid might have never catch Jony... also if u can see... jony is already left only because He loves towards Billu makes him to turn boat towards shore... or he might have escape from CID's grip...
The International terrorist are always behind such peoples...

Jony's aggressiveness merger with his anger and revenge thing and he become more khtaranak

Baldev just use his brain to fullfill his mission...
Guest chapter 13 . 9/30/2012
hmmm but my query is that why Baldev give such stupid work to Johny...
either He knew its Not Johny field na...
DewDrop29 chapter 13 . 9/30/2012
Wow really nice story & this chp was amazing bt last para was sad bt nice:)
Raven'sCAT chapter 13 . 9/30/2012
good job i loved it it was very good :) and yea that shivani should try writing a story and sees what she gets and also how hard it is
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