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AngelNinja chapter 6 . 1/29/2013
I love the twist that happened here and in chapter 7...It's very similar to another manga series that I love, We Were There (Bokura ga Ita)...similar to what happened to Yano Motoharu and Nana Takahashi, Kanata and Miyu took 10 years before they were finally reunited for good.
AngelNinja chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
(Post Script: please delete my immediately preceeding two comments-one signed and one unsigned-for this story. I had made some grammatical errors there. Here is the corrected version of my comment for chapter 7).

Maybe the cancer that struck Hayate was (in someway or another) the punishment for his selfishness about having Miyu all for himself- using his illness in threatening to commit suicide in order to force Miyu to marry him. Kanata had suffered so much misery, pain, loneliness, and loss of meaning to his existence after Miyu left him alone and married Hayate (just like I said earlier, he had sacrificed his own joy, dreams, life, and future just to respect Miyu's decision). Add the fact that Kanata was kept uninformed for five years about his child with Miyu. Yet I'm still glad that Hayate did everything he could to atone for the full weight of his sins to Kanata by taking care of Kanata's daughter, taking care of Miyu even though Kanata is still the man she loves, and pleading Kanata to reunite and marry Miyu after his death so that Kanata could take care of Miyu, Hana, and Hayate's mom after finally confiding to Kanata that the only one person whom Miyu ever got intimate with in her entire life (and consequently, got her pregnant) is non other that Kanata himself. I agree with your decision to the cliche of writing the details of Kanata and Miyu's subsequent wedding (after all, it's already very obvious that would happen after Hayate gave back Miyu her freedom and returned her to Kanata after acknowledging that Kanata deserves to have Miyu much more than Hayate himself ever would-by admitting that no matter what he did in their rivalry, Kanata always remained superior to him in Miyu's life), but I think you should have clarified you story more by writing if Hana found out that Kanata is actually her father and how she would react about such a revelation. Also, you should have stated how Miyu would atone for all the mistakes she did to Kanata and how she could make up for all of the sacrifices he had made just for her.
AngelNinja chapter 7 . 1/28/2013
(Post Script: please delete my immediately preceeding-and signed comment- for this story. I had made some grammatical errors there. Here is the full version).

Maybe the cancer that struck Hayate was (in someway or another) the punishment for his selfishness about having Miyu all for himself-coercing her to marry him by threatening to commit. Kanata had suffered so much misery, pain, loneliness, and loss of meaning to his existence after Miyu left him alone and married Hayate (just like I said earlier, he had sacrificed his own joy, dreams, life, and future just to respect Miyu's decision). Add the fact that Kanata was kept uninformed for five years about his child with Miyu. Yet I'm still glad that you made Hayate atone for the full weight of his sins to Kanata by taking care of Kanata's daughter, taking care of Miyu even though Kanata is still the man she loves, and pleading Kanata to reunite and marry Miyu after his death so that Kanata could take care of Miyu, Hana, and Hayate's mom after finally confiding to Kanata that the only one person whom Miyu ever got intimate with in her entire life (and consequently, got her pregnant) is non other that Kanata himself. I agree with your decision to the cliche of writing the details of Kanata and Miyu's subsequent wedding (after all, it's already very obvious that would happen after Hayate gave back Miyu her freedom and returned her to Kanata after acknowledging that Kanata deserves to have Miyu much more than Hayate himself ever would-by admitting that no matter what he did in their rivalry, Kanata always remained superior to him in Miyu's life), but I think you should have clarified you story more by writing if Hana found out that Kanata is actually her father and how she would react about such a revelation. Also, you should have stated how Miyu would atone for all the mistakes she did to Kanata and how she could make up for all of the sacrifices he had made just for her.
AngelNinja chapter 7 . 1/28/2013
Maybe the cancer that struck Hayate was (in someway or another) the punishment for his selfishness about having Miyu all for himself-coercing her to marry him by threatening to commit. Kanata had suffered so much misery, pain, loneliness, and loss of meaning to his existence after Miyu left him alone and married Hayate (just like I said earlier, he had sacrificed his own joy, dreams, life, and future just to respect Miyu's decision). Add the fact that Kanata was kept uninformed for five years about his child with Miyu. Yet I'm still glad that you made Hayate atone for the full weight of his sins to Kanata by taking care of Kanata's daughter, taking care of Miyu even though Kanata is still the man she loves, and pleading Kanata to reunite and marry Miyu after his death so that Kanata could take care of Miyu, Hana, and Hayate's mom after finally revealing that the only person whom Miyu ever got intimate with in her entire life (and consequently, got her pregnant) is non other that Kanata. I agree with your decision avoiding the cliche of writing the details of Kanata and Miyu's subsequent wedding (after all, it's already very obvious that would happen), but I think you should have clarified you story more by writing if Hana found out that Kanata is actually her father and how she would react about such a revelation. Also, you should have stated how Miyu would atone for all the mistakes she did to Kanata and how she could make for all of the sacrifices he had made just for her.
yashu3793 chapter 7 . 1/27/2013
I forgot to tell u..i think..u hv already noticed it..that u wrote "tough" instead of "touch"... :)
Yaashee3793 chapter 7 . 1/27/2013
Thnx for the special chptr kitty..,, & thnx for pikachu who requested it..., thnk u both.. :)
pikachu chapter 7 . 1/26/2013
Awesome chapter ...thank you so much for granting my request...I am soooo happy...finally miyu n kanata together with a cute little daughter ..,... :-)
Marnaika Marina chapter 7 . 1/25/2013
Ohh It's a great ending. I really felt bad when u didn't make it a MiXKa. But now it's perfect.
Hinate chapter 6 . 11/12/2012
MiyuxKanata...love...forever...
r-u-insane...how...could...u...
it...hurts...my...heart...well...for..me...after...this...
Hayate...got... ... .rit..on..spot...nd...Kanata-took-Miyu's-hand-nd-they-went-to-America..nd...they...live...Happy...ever...after...
pikachu chapter 6 . 11/2/2012
i didnt liked ending at all sorry for that...i was hoping that they will be together...kanata suffered the most in all of them he was away from home alone, lonely for god knows how many years struggling to come back home when he finally comes back he loses miyu thats too unfair...and hayate here is too much whiny crybaby crying for little things like a mama's boy.. he didnt suffered as much as kanata...i think u should write another one last final chapter in which everything falls into pieces and miyu & kanata finally becomes one plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz z its a request from all kanata fans...and yes i am very upset with ending but story was really good and u were updating really fast unlike some authors of some really cool daa daa daa fanfici appreciate that alot ...but please fullfill my request of one last happy ending chapter plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...:'-(
littlepuppylost chapter 6 . 10/25/2012
even though the ending was sad...
I kinda like it.
it is not the typical cliche ending!
GOOD JOB! :P
yashu3793 chapter 6 . 10/25/2012
I don't like the ending... :((
AngelNinja chapter 5 . 10/20/2012
You surely post new chapters much faster (at an average rate of 1 chapter/week) than most writers here in (including me)...I just wonder if it will take you more than a week to finish this story(I can't wait to read the final chapter; I hope it will take you less than a week to write and post the final chapter just like what happened last time)...

Anyway, I will definitely say that between the two men, Kanata is the one who truly loves Miyu with all his heart and mind...he freely allowed Miyu to make her own decisions even if meant a whole lot of agony for him...the other guy was a very selfish man...he used his illness as a means of getting Miyu to answer in his favor. In love, you should never make your beloved feel guilty just to make him/her love you again if he/she loves another person more than you.
Yaashee3793 chapter 4 . 10/17/2012
Love the chappie. Bt..hayate is right.. He did so mch for miyu..nd bt..miyu.. wt can she do if she luv kanata nd waited for him..., i'm worried alot.. I knw its only a fanfic.. Anyways update soon. ;) I jst love to read ur story..
fara lee chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
yay new chapter and kanata is back!
no comment bout the story.. i just love it :)
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