|Reviews for Cry of the Forbidden Ones|
| Mask Rider Roy chapter 6 . 11/8/2013
Nice chapter, and while this new arc serves as a "preview", the new characters will serve as "basis" for Kanon to interact with during this arc.
| thechossen1 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Man this is a great story love a tale with supernatural ties
Ill finish up the chapters but this is great
| Mask Rider Roy chapter 5 . 10/22/2013
Glad that you're back...miss your fics...
Nice chapter, and it was suspenseful in a lot of ways.
Now that this arc is over, I'll be looking forward to the next arc.
| Fan Of Games chapter 5 . 10/22/2013
This is a pretty interesting tale. I've read it since the first chapter, though I haven't reviewed it up until now since I wanted to see how it'd progress for a bit. With this first arc done quite nicely, I'd say it's shaping up to be an excellent read. I'll keep reading this story and give a full review at the end. I'll be looking forward to the next arc (which I predict will involve the headless horseman or one of the four horsemen of the apocalypse); keep up the good work and good luck.
Oh, and feel free to read and review some of my works if you'd like.
| James Birdsong chapter 4 . 9/16/2013
Good four chapters
| Mask Rider Roy chapter 4 . 9/11/2013
The wait is worth it, and the chapter is really tense, especially with the mystery-themes thrown in.
The next chapter would be more suspenseful, I assume.
| Mask Rider Roy chapter 3 . 1/25/2013
Quite a suspenseful chapter.
Will await the next chapter.
| PokeRescue18 chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
This is PokeRescue18 delivering to you this chapter analysis/review:
I don't know much about the When They Cry series, but you managed to keep the characters believable. I did a little digging about this series, and it's a visual novel.
You made the battle scene awesome; I almost forgot that your story is an Alternate Universe to that of Umineko no Naku Koro ni.
And if you must know, I already have plans to write a sequel to "A Certain Duelist's Dream", but I need to write at least two more chapters on Crisis before I can write for the sequel. If you must know, the basic plot of the sequel will have Motor-mouth dueling a dark/evil version of himself. That guy will summon members GREMLIN as his deck. GREMLIN is a group that is based on Norse Mythology, and there's a deck in YuGiOh that is also based on Norse Mythology, called the Nordics/Aesir. What do you think of this ideas?
| Mask Rider Roy chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
Looks like Kanon's mission is about to commence now he has a "sidekick" for a familiar...
I expect he's going to have some difficulty in this assignment of his...
| Mask Rider Roy chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Not a bad start. This chapter seems more than not inspired from the US film "Abraham Lincolm: Vampire Hunter".
I was expecting the & witches from Umineko itself, but nevertheless I will DEFINITELY stick around on this one. I wonder if other Umineklo characters would also appear, since Kanaon alone will no doubt bring the others, such as Battler Urashima, in to the mix...