Reviews for Nothing Sweet
Guest chapter 5 . 12/10/2013
i also liked that jackson wasn't just being dominated by derek and he tried to take control :3
anyway really sexy, i would've loved to see more too bad its finished D:
ItsSkiBitches chapter 5 . 7/27/2013
Wow, I would like to see a full story for this. If it was a full story would they fall in love? How would people react if they found out? Hope you come back to this!
Emrys90 chapter 5 . 12/15/2012
Poor yet lucky Stiles.
Disappointed fan chapter 5 . 10/11/2012
Chapter 5 SUCKED!
Mason and Alex chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
love it xD
derekleftstilesforme chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
I really appreciate the way you wrote Derek. It actually feels like him, and thank you for not putting him on the bottom, I hate that. It really takes away from his character but you've written them perfectly
The lady loves the dark chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
Wow! that threesome! ah why did Derek have to be locked up? lol! It was sooo HOt! I'm Jerek fan..but I loved this too! I'm still waiting for that Jerek..
Guest chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
This chapter SUCKS! The characters all were sucking each other off, so I think my review that the chapter SUCKED and not in a good way is very appropriate. "Personal chew toy"

Could this fic be anymore passive aggressive, and just weak in plot, character development and again with the making Stiles into a weak but willing bottom boy whore, did't see that one, NOT.
Mrah chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
So, clearly, people do not understand that PWP mean Porn Without Plot. You even warned them before hand.
That's essentially what the bulk of this story is.
You do a wonderful job capturing the personalities of each character.
Finish out this story! Naysayers are just going to be naysayers.
You're awesome. It's awesome, not perfect, but it's still very good.
Keep writing!
Halemore chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I think I'm becoming more and more disappointed with his fic, it appears that perusal, this fic will become a threeway and then possibly and threeway/polyamorous relationship with either Stiles, or Danny possibly boh, which is both predictable, sad and very disappointing.
JacksonxDerek chapter 4 . 9/22/2012
Thanks for the update, however it appears this fanfic is turning into a partial Sterek fic which sucks. Sterek is 80% of TW fanfics.

I figured it would turn into a 3 way with Stiles sooner or later, since how could 2 werewolves not smell Stiles every time they are hooking up and could Stiles not think of that.

I am pretty certain when it gets to the Stiles 3 way, I'll skip that chapter because it was too predictable and it'll, plus I thought Jackson stated in an earlier chapter that he doesn't like to share.
ijustreadthefics chapter 3 . 9/18/2012
love all the slashy goodness but please don't make it a story that leads to some generic 3 way with them...too many out there...i just want some jerek!

feel free to keep writing more jerek slash though :P
The lady loves the dark chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
*wipes drool* HOT HOT HOT! I loved this! There should be more Jerek PWP's liks this! Fantastic sex! heehee
JerekHalemore chapter 3 . 9/17/2012
Had the day off and came across this fanfic and since I am all about Jerek aka Jackson & Derek I was happy to find these 3 chapters and then and I was given an unpleasant surprise, which happens far too much.

I was a little upset that chapter 1 was all about the sex and control and Stiles witnessing it, then chapter 2 was all about Stiles dreaming it and him being part of th action LAME! Finally chapter 3 was 99.8% of Stiles point of view with more sex with Derek and Jackson, but where is the story?

This seems like another potential Sterek fanfic to go with the rest of the 11,000 that are already out there, when does Jackson and Derek have some inner dialogue or their prospective on the situation or at least some actual interaction between Derek and Jackson that's not just sex, bondage and possible rape?
Not N2 Sterek chapter 3 . 9/17/2012
Chapter 3 was more about Stiles than Jackson and Derek combined. I get Stiles is out, naive and nosey, but him being a voyeur is too much and if this story goes where it appears to be going,with Stiles getting caught and being forced or even let him participate I some 3way, this fic will be just as predictable as the rest.

I applaud you for writing, but this is far too much Stiles/potential Sterek for me.
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