Reviews for Four Telephones
TheSingingPterodactyl chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
I loved this, it was so sweet in the end! I love how you portrayed Connor too, he was so funny and pretty accurate to the character. Jecker and Conby are my OTP's, so this was perfect. Great job!
Aithion chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
Nawwwwwwwwww so sweet! I loved it! DEFINITELY GETTING FAVOURITED! :)
Aithion chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
Also, you've added another thing to your story I've been wondering about - th phones :P Kooky yet cool ;) I was actually wondering the other day if they worked :P ehehe

AHA Becker bashed the door down...It's kinda funny and cute in a sick kinda way how round about he is in trying to 'protect' Jess. Probably just miffed they got keys and he didn't... ehehehe
Aithion chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I'm sorry, but the start of this chapter was bloody brilliant. I always thought they skipped the bit after Jess gave her keys to Connor - I mean, she was talking to Becker then whoompf she just runs off to give her keys to Connor, then when she comes back there's not so much as a peep out of Becker.

Loved the way you fit it all seamlessly together :)
DrawnToDarkness chapter 3 . 9/14/2012
Really loved the concluding part - Connor & Abby helping Becker with the phones was brilliant and I was cheering him on during his speech/apology. Really loved reading this - you two write seamlessly together and I look forward to more from you both!
Prawn Crackers chapter 3 . 9/13/2012
This is an amazing story! Beautiful and funny and witty!

I love the telephones! All of them! Brilliant idea!

Well done, ladies!
Mijo54 chapter 3 . 9/12/2012
Becker sait reconnaitre ses erreurs ce qui est une preuve d'intelligence ! j'aime bien l'idée des 3 téléphones suplémentaires, c'est amusant ! Jess finit par accepter ses excuses et obtient enfin un rendez-vous ! j'aurais aimé un baiser mais vous vous aligner peut être sur la série et peu de baisers !
j'espère que vous écrirez d'autres histoires en partenariat celle ci était amusante et plaisante à lire !
à bientôt de vous lire !
Mijo54 chapter 2 . 9/12/2012
Connor est vraiment mignon quand il veut se faire pardonner ! Becker est vraiment quelqu'un de complexe : il prétend ne pas avoir de sentiments pour Jess mais se comporte en "dictateur" envers elle ! je comprends qu'il se fasse du souci pour elle mais ce n'est pas en lui criant dessus alors qu'ils "ne sont même pas amis" d'après ses propres paroles , qu'il lui fera comprendre ce qu'il en est !
à bientôt de vous lire !
Mijo54 chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Je suis très étonnée de l'attitude de Becker vis à vis de Connor et Abby : il les a fréquenté pendant un ou deux ans avant leur période dans le crétacé et il ne leur fait pas plus confiance ! Pourquoi seraient ils devenus des voleurs ou quoi que ce soit d'autre pendant ce temps ? Jess est la gentillesse et le candeur même , elle veut le bonheur pour tout le monde ! et pour elle ?
à bientôt de vous lire !
Martin-J-Christopher-Freeman chapter 3 . 9/11/2012
Aww X

Please update soon! loving this sofar. :)
Rubytronix chapter 3 . 9/11/2012
Ahh! That's a great idea and so cute! Really enjoying this story!
Rubytronix chapter 2 . 9/11/2012
'Burglars who turn out to be Beckers!'- what a great line! Lol! Love Connor grabbing a lamp to protect him and Abby- he's always so good at improvising! I also enjoyed the play with the phones. That's so Connor (OK- I have to admit it- it's something I'd do too!)
Great job- I'm off to read chapter three...
DrawnToDarkness chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
Oh, wow, I am in love with this story! I was just wondering why Jess had the four phones - and thinking that I really, really want some myself - and then I checked and found this and it's brilliant.

I love the idea of Becker not being pleased with Jess inviting Abby and Connor back to hers - that's something I think he'd probably do, regardless of how well he knows them - and I love, love, love Jess's advice to Connor re: Abby and her speech to Becker was perfect.

Really looking forward to the next part!
TheMusicKnows chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
This is a really good story...something I have always wondered about...
I know you only want to do three chapters but I would liketo see more than three chapters
Um. . .someone chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Cute :) looking forward to the next chapter!
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