Reviews for League of Legends: Fall of the Great
Guest chapter 3 . 12/31/2013
Too many spelling and grammar errors. Ex: toke is actually took, mear is mere, figgited is fidgeted (too many to name) . The general concept, I suppose, is interesting enough...your writing is not.
PoisonLiquid chapter 9 . 6/6/2013
love your story man, keep it up
Guest chapter 8 . 4/8/2013
I really don't think Jarvan III would approve of his son marrying a half dragon.
Since he does have to produce a heir and what not.
In the most likely case Jarvans IV's marriage would be arranged
And probably to a noble of Demacia.
So theoretically isn't it more likely that he ends up with lux?
Just wondering.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/14/2013
Try to spel a little bit better anyway funny story :D
TheEpicJ chapter 9 . 2/5/2013
Very good indeed but some lemons wouldn't be bad ;p
pabuisperfect chapter 8 . 1/25/2013
Aksine chapter 8 . 1/22/2013
Really good chapters (a few spelling mistakes here and there) ,but it would be better if each of the scenes were more descriptive and longer,but i know it's hard with so many characters in place ,And poor lux :(
the epic j chapter 7 . 1/7/2013
Epic story man like it sooo much !
blob chapter 7 . 1/6/2013
Poor, poor darius... pretty excited for the next chapter, couldnt help but notice all the references to a song of fire and ice series, you sly author you :)
Aksine chapter 6 . 1/1/2013
This gets more and more interesting ,keep it up,Darius and Vi would make a good pair, and congos on the less mistakes ,but not to point out you seem make spelling mistakes that are phonetical ,waiting for next chapter :)
Aksine chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
Really nice story,but has no central plot as such ,also a lot of grammatical errors (You can take the help of online thesaurus and word correctors )
Golden Buddha chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
This is a good story, but a lot of grammatical errors
Guest chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
It's really great that you have so many characters in your story. Keep it up!
En Taro Adun Executor chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
Awesome chapter, needs definite revisement over grammar and simple spelling mistakes. Other than that, this is a good story so far.
Blob chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I always like these kind of fictions, however they always seem entirely noxus/DEMACIAAAA! based, it will be nice to see how some of the smaller nations (freljord, piltover etc.) handle the war