Reviews for What You're Missing
DemeRain chapter 6 . 9/7/2014
Thanks for sharing.
WingsOfDuskAndDawn chapter 6 . 9/2/2014
This was just... Okay, at the risk of sounding like John, I'm going to cut off the rather long list of synonyms for "fantastic" I was likely about to launch into there, but seriously, this was lovely on so many levels. Wonderful, beautiful job.
ising4life chapter 6 . 3/20/2014
This was great! John and Sherlock are so adorable!
d1x1lady chapter 6 . 2/26/2014
So cute! Absolutely fabulous story. Your writing captures their humor and friendship in the most wonderful way.
Bookwoman17NerdyMom chapter 6 . 9/23/2013
ButterscotchCandybatch chapter 6 . 9/13/2013
So sweet! I love how you blended a canon story with your own character development - well done! It all fits together so perfectly!
EJ 12212012 chapter 6 . 7/1/2013
They are adorable.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/16/2013
Wow! Thank you
MyFirstistheFourth chapter 6 . 6/7/2013
GOD! You suckered the pure Romantic in me with this one! :-D Made my heart go "pitter-pat" as the saying goes! LOL I absolutely LOVED the "gifting" of love to Sherlock! The scene on the couch was PERFECT! Sensual, tender, and romantic! (Heck, I want an afternoon on the couch like that!) And the follow-up to that was just as good, the date, the sex, the relationship...just Perfectly Wonderful! And the tidbits in the epilogue were Great! Cute, cuddly, and still Them! I read ALL kinds of stories and enjoy them and have absolutely no aversion to smut! ;) :) I think you should be commended for writing a Really nice piece without going straight to the hard sex. You covered the development of a relationship in a very real way adding the sex in naturally and I think that is a hard balance for some writers to achieve. thanks soo much for the Great Ride! :-D
traveling-imagination chapter 6 . 5/18/2013
I love this story!
the case was based on the original sherlock case "the yellow face" wasn't it ;)
sakuradancer3 chapter 6 . 4/30/2013
I originally found this story to be a bit generic...but then I kept going.

Your characterization was brilliant, truly. The last three chapters were absolutely frickin' fantastic, and deserved a stellar review. Great job. .
thetreasure11 chapter 2 . 2/14/2013
Kokoroyume chapter 6 . 10/30/2012
Great story :)
High-Functioning Ginger chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
What I love about this chp is the angst of Sherlock assuming that John's simply lusts for him because that's all he understands. To him affection and lust are basically the same and both are born of chemistry - I love that you captured that idea instead of giving him the emotional insight to quickly.
Clieo chapter 6 . 10/15/2012
Loved your story, love&hugs Clieo
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