|Reviews for Ostriches|
| Hancock23 chapter 64 . 7/8
good job. i liked it
| Hancock23 chapter 35 . 7/2
I think Harry has a god complex and its completely unbecoming. i dont understand why he thinks everything is about him, its too forced.
| mysnecret chapter 64 . 6/11
Your story was absolutely lovely. I really enjoyed it so much. I look forward to reading your other stories now. Thank you.
| mysnecret chapter 50 . 6/9
I would have thought that attacking invited guests for doing nothing more than arriving at the appointed time would be the height of rudeness and bad manners. Fluer's attitude is inexcusable. I cant believe they acted like Harry and Draco were somehow to blame. I would have left.
| Guest chapter 25 . 6/2
I'm only on chapter 25 right now, but I wanted to say something before I went on. I'm pretty sure that scene in 24b would've been fine to have on here. I've read much more detailed sex scenes (off of the top of my head, there was one involving Harry being a Dom and Draco the submissive) and those are on this site. That being said, I don't mind having to go to a different website to read them lol Oh and detailed was the only way I could think to describe them lol
Also, LOVE the story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!
| SKUGDY chapter 33 . 5/14
that second part of the chapter was intense to say the least!
failed to notice that previous chaps also were continued somewhere else so imagine my confusion to previous sexy times. oh well, this story is great so im sure ill reread it again some day and then ill read those google docs parts
good story, im curious to see what happens next
| sapphire80 chapter 24 . 5/9
well that was seriously off putting, now I don't know if I will finish this story now, I feel like I missed a major part of the story even thou its just sex, I tried going on but it feels almost point less if every-time they get intimate it cuts out the whole scene, sigh! I know its not you fault cause of , just frustrated lol and you are probably not even on this site anymore to even send me a link, ah well, maybe a break might help
| sapphire80 chapter 22 . 5/9
geez! nearly midway through this chapter and such mixed emotions, you really have it down pat this bittersweet, love hate thing to a T, you know those couple who seem to fight all the time but somehow are still together and love each other still. Sometimes I am not sure I like Draco at all and then he says something so sweet its annoying, I feel for Harry lol I know I would have killed him long before I even acknowledged him as someone to be attracted too much less date
| sapphire80 chapter 6 . 5/9
reading this over again and liked it just as much as the first time! I can't help disagreeing a lot with the banter between Draco and Harry, its a lot of but no if you weren't such a brat from since day one when they were getting fitted for robes and no no you can't say that after what you did and a lot more but but but! XD is like I know Draco is who he is and can't do a 180 change in personality (that is years of bad influence and spoiling) but geez, you really don't have a foot to stand on in any argument concerning anything to do with the war and pass grievances and only thing you should be doing is being apologetic or not mentioning it at all cx goes back to reading, just had to get that off my chest xD
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/9
I can't count how many times I have read this story. It is my all time favorite story.
| Guest chapter 64 . 5/7
Wow that's great!
This is the BEST Drarry I've ever read! 12/10 on the sex scences! Wish there were more of those. They were really, really good!
| KatnissHermioneCullen chapter 15 . 5/6
Pillow talk, my enemy my ally. Prisoners, then we're free it's a thriller. I'm seein' the pain seein' the pleasure nobody but you, body but me, body but us bodies together. . . .
Sorry I had to. I'm obsessed with Zayn and One Direction.
Btw in one of your previous chapters you said one direction. . . .
Also this is a really good story. Sorry I haven't reviewed much yet but I couldn't pull myself away from it long enough to review. It's really good.
| KatnissHermioneCullen chapter 5 . 5/6
If you life having secret little rendezvous and if like to do the things you know that we shouldn't do baby I'm perfect for you. . .
Sorry I had to. lol :)
| jon2256 chapter 53 . 5/5
Learn to write like a normal person when giving a url address
| thgjk chapter 33 . 5/5
Link don't work