Reviews for Naruto the demon of the red lotus
uzuuchi007 chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
Nice !
Mr. Sqweakers The Great chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
This is too funny, I can't wait to see more of this wonderful story.
FlyingTurtleduck chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Your grammar and spelling are just plain horrible.
The attempts at humor are rather pathetic.
I sincerely hope you improve with time, because this is no good.
Doritoboy chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
"ARE YOU READY FOR THE POWER OF YOUTH!" -_- I'm laughing my ass off write now Update Soon (-)
Skipper917 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Great Job!
Freedom its2l8 chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
wow um.. I don't mean to be, mean but.. um... you have really bad grammar. Anyway the story line is good and I'm glad I could understand it.
god of all chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue this story soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
supert history
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
great story
bloodshark chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
I like it its actiony and funny. I say get buggy as a crewman/navigtor not sure how to spell that. and kuro as the medic. not sure off anying else to say etce never seen that before. post soon
jgreek chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
great story keep it up
StormyTempest chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Flame: You're trying to be funny, yet you're not. Your grammar and spelling sucks. Your story is too cliched -the type which I like (Godlike Naruto).
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Lol best way to steal ship good job on your chapter loved the power of youth line
kiyomos chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Good plot but the execution sucked. Your jumping from one sentence to the next without making it flow. In order to make it flow use the transitional words and phrases.