|Reviews for Breaking a Sisterly Bond|
| animeroxursox chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Hey, this was posted on my b-day. :-)
I like it! I read the sequel first, though:j
| autumn midnights chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
This was excellent! I really liked Parvati's view of Padma/Kingsley, and I can definitely picture her feeling jealous of her sister since she doesn't have the things Padma does. The fact that she tries to get Kingsley to mistake her for Padma makes a lot of sense, too, I can picture her trying that since they are twins. I don't think I've ever read Auror!Parvati, either, I think that's an interesting, creative idea and it fits really perfectly into this fic. I can definitely picture some of the Trio Era people thinking that Auror was the only choice for them, like Padma does here. I like how you didn't focus as much on formatting in this, and you just let the words speak for themselves; I think in this particular freeverse, it works really well that way. It's a new look at the Padma-Parvati sisterly bond, too, because usually people write them as being really close, and this is very original. As always, great job!