|Reviews for LA Crass Ways|
| Disturbed Bestie chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
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I was a thrown off a few times by your pronoun usage, bye I admire the format of this one, how it's broken into little sections rather than an entire story. It's to the point, yet still describes to the reader everything needed to know. From this alone, the audience grasps a strong concept of the characters, and if you should ever write a book, I hope you open it up with this format-it really draws me in.