Reviews for The Golden Elixir
reader chapter 13 . 11/13/2002
I've enjoyed your work a great deal. This story is delightful;I love it. Please follow up on it as soon as possible, I can't wait to read a play by play of severus's reaction to "apollo's" little revelation. Sincerely: a fan
Ariana Deralte chapter 13 . 11/1/2002
All view points are good. Wonder if Apollo will ever tell Snape?...Anyway, let me repeat that this story is well written and the plot is certainly unique despite my dislike of certain characters.
Ariana Deralte chapter 12 . 11/1/2002
Well that was an interesting explanation for aberforth's goat charm.
Ariana Deralte chapter 8 . 11/1/2002
Isn't she only nineteen? He's only two years younger than her, and obviously very mature...Very Slytherin of Dumbledore as well...Poor Snape I think...
Ariana Deralte chapter 7 . 11/1/2002
Well, I'm impressed by Albus. Hmm about Zosimus...
Ariana Deralte chapter 6 . 11/1/2002
Ah ha...I can see where the pairs are going here...
Ariana Deralte chapter 5 . 11/1/2002
I suppose I owe you a review at this point...I like your writing style and this story is well written. I don't like Delaia, but I've never liked any character who is even in a position to be a mary sue...but your plot has intrigued me, so I'm reading onwards. Not sure what that comment at the end of the chapter was getting at though...
Kate chapter 13 . 9/1/2002
GREAT story!Keep on writin alright. Can't wait for the second book!
sara lee slitherin chapter 13 . 7/25/2002
partially for and partialy against, i think you should write it from all four perspectives.

also I should mention that the part in chapter 9 where Snape contemplates suicide is extremly well placed. I had to get stiches for the split in my side that caused me. I'll be sending YOU the doctors bill.
Zardiphillian Beryllix chapter 12 . 7/21/2002
whoa...I don't log on for less than 24 hours and you spring two whole chapters on me! hehe. So "Apollo" is actually a girl? That's great. That definitely explains why Delaia was so surprised. Delaia and Albus are adorable, by the way.

And thanks for the email!
Zebee chapter 12 . 7/21/2002
I wasn't sure what to make of it when I first started reading, but I am liking it so far.

For a story exploring Albus, he's still not really getting much time or explanation :)

I admit that Zosimus's perennial polyjuicing and love drugging is stretching my credibility rather. Too many chances for the polyjuice to wear off at a critical moment, and someone somewhere is going to be resistant or allergic...
Zardiphillian Beryllix chapter 10 . 7/20/2002
Ooooo. Sneaky Albus. hehe. But what happened to Apollo? Aaaah the suspense!
Zardiphillian Beryllix chapter 9 . 7/20/2002
Another great chapter. Apollo is hilarious, and despite the fact that Severus is a complete bastard, I can't help but adore him here...course he's my favorite character anyway, but that's beside the point. *grins* thing...I find that many people who review my own stories do so anonymously. Maybe if you allowed anonymous reviews, you would get more. I can't say for sure, but it's worth a try. After all, many people are too lazy to log in: myself included, quite frequently.

Anyway...update soon!
Blackletter chapter 8 . 7/19/2002
Awww...Apollo and Severus are so...(I hesitate to say the word "cute" when involving Severus, but nothing else springs to mind.) And Albus Dumbledore, incorrigible flirt- I love it! I greatly look forward to the next chapter.
Zardiphillian Beryllix chapter 8 . 7/19/2002
lmao. Aw, Severus *cares*! hehe

I love the way you characterize Dumbledore here. For some reason, I can picture him being a shameless flirt. Gotta love that closing line.

Just one question: what about the Triwizard Tournament? They won't be candidates, will they?
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