|Reviews for Life in The Flock|
| DramioneFax4EVA chapter 12 . 1/10
Okay, I am sorry for the flames I have been giving but they are only to help you become a better writer. And here's some more: WHY THE HELL did max say she would send them back to the School?! You CANNOT DO THAT to this story and just saying that blew me way, way out of the water! You are really an amazing storyteller. You have quite the imagination! I am very excited to read the rest of this story. I'm still mad max lost the baby tho!
| DramioneFax4EVA chapter 10 . 1/10
This is not cool. The story would've been better if max had never found the ring, or Iggy in the other chapter shouldn't have been able to see; you should have used nudge instead. Also, I still don't think max should have lost the baby. I hope it gets better, and I'm sure it will. You are good at keeping people's attention, I'll give you that!
| DramioneFax4EVA chapter 9 . 1/10
What the hell! You are NOT supposed to make her lose the baby! Grr!
| zoxy2 chapter 9 . 11/28/2013
i am not a very big fan of this chapter why on earth did you make them have a miscarriage, that is just oh so very wrong.
| Carpe Diem Vampire chapter 9 . 9/26/2013
this is great! buut.. there are a few things 'wrong'. is iggy still blind? because his POV sounds like he can see. and with iggy and nudge, she says "Fang said I had to be in my own bed, he didn't say that you couldn't be in it with me." but the thing is that last chap Fang actually did point that out. that she should be in her own bed and iggy had better not be in it.
| C.D.K 8 chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
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| Hannah dunst chapter 19 . 4/15/2013
This is a gr8 story! Please right more!
| vampiregirl31 chapter 20 . 4/3/2013
| anon chapter 11 . 3/14/2013
wait... is Iggy blind in the story?
| 21098stln chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
Haha..you did a really good job capturing u her character, that story was better than slot of the ones I've read on this site just for the fact the characters so slutty that they weren't themselves anymore
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/6/2013
I loved it! Can you make one after this one about they're life after.
| dragon fier 20 chapter 20 . 2/7/2013
yay! i loved the ending, even though i wish there were names for the children. either way, it was awesome. i loved Maximum Ride, and i just finished reading the series recently, and loved it so much that i'm rereading it. loved the story, thought it had lots of action, love, and drama, which makes the best stories ever. loved it!
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/4/2013
Sorry, raven, the guest you referenced to in this chapter was in fact me, speedray. My computer is derping and so my thing never signed in. Your advise actually did help me, thank you so much. I enjoyed this last chapter, I'll admit that I did fangirl over it. Good luck with your new story, I know it'll be great. I read sex slaves and piercings and thought of the new story you said you were writing, *still crossing fingers for yaoi* but good luck anyways.
| HarmonyBenderFreak chapter 20 . 2/5/2013
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOO NOT THE END NO NO NO!
We don't even know the Fax babies' names!
*sniff* I thought you loved us! (BTW, I so so so love you for putting me in this chapter. I really appreciate it, and it made my day.)
| TiffOdair chapter 20 . 2/5/2013