|Reviews for Dark Justice|
| SunniGummi chapter 40 . 2/13
Noo, it's over :( But the ending was great and rounded up the entire tale just perfectly. While I hate to see that this story has come to an end, I have the feeling that the family is actually glad, hehe ;) It was a bumpy ride for sure.
Thank you for sharing your work with us and I am so looking forward to reading more from you! Esme and Rose are waiting *grins*
Keep the stories coming!
| TwiFanfictionRecs chapter 1 . 2/1
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| chronos-girl chapter 40 . 1/19
AAHHH! NOOOO! It's over? awww! I had to re-read chapter 39 to catch up and I can't deny that I'm still upset with Esme for being so accusatory and what have you towards Carlisle, but I understand her anger and sense of protection over her children, especially her boys.
Maybe you could make a simple one-shot of how Carlisle handled his grief or handled moving on from that scene in Dark Justice? Would be nice to know if Esme had to knock some sense into the man or "dun dun dun" call in Eleazar to handle the stubborn blonde. Haha. And since this is completed, I'll most likely toss this onto my kindle to read again while I fly to Japan in April. :D
I'm glad that the Hayfords are able to tolerate Jasper for their daughter's sake. That was good of them. Great story, as always! Can't wait to see what else you come up with. I hope you're feeling much better!
| Jessiwazhere chapter 40 . 1/19
This was such a good story and I can't wait to see what else's you come up with!
| Catspector chapter 40 . 1/18
Great story - thanks for the wonderful ride.
| Guest chapter 40 . 1/16
| Guest chapter 40 . 1/16
Wow...now this is the way to end a great story! Thanks for the pleasure reading this.
| Jessiwazhere chapter 13 . 1/15
I do t agree with Jasper being sent away I think what Alice said would have worked just fine because where the earlier situations were kept between Father and son he suggestion would be between family and son
| Cullen1007 chapter 40 . 1/15
Thank you for sharing your truly remarkable and brilliant story.
Jasper has been on a long journey and it was great to experience his highs and lows and culminating in his new found positive mindset under Eleazar's guidance and influence.
All good things must come to an end and although it is sad to see the story ending, it has ended on a high note.
I will be re-reading it again and again.
Excellent job. I'll be looking forward to your new stories.
| rubyblue100 chapter 40 . 1/14
The end of an era...and the start of something new and wonderful for you. Thankyou for sharing this WONDERFUL story with us...were all sad the journey is over but looking forward to the next ones.
That ending was just perfect...love Ya girl...xxxxxxxx
| Dixie.f.9 chapter 40 . 1/14
I have enjoyed your story. It's good to see Jasper finally feel like a full part of the family. Not just because of Alice. That him and Carlisle have finally grown close. Looking forward to the next story.
| Cullen Cousin chapter 40 . 1/14
What a wonderfull way to end the story! Loved the story, you did an excellent job!
| charligibbs chapter 40 . 1/14
What a great completion to a great story. This has been a great story cant wait to see what else the Cullen boys will get into... and thank you for sharing your stories with us
| Carlisle Fan 22 chapter 40 . 1/14
This was such an amazing story. I laughed at parts and I cried at parts so that's how I knew it was a good story. Excellent work on this. You deserve a pat on the back and a round of applause. Well done my friend. :D
| Spawn chapter 40 . 1/14
Have I mentioned how happy I am that you're writing again? REALLY happy! I thought the ending to this was touching. I'm happy that Jasper returned to the family that loves him and came out of this experience better for it.
I'm glad that he visited Amanda and her family. He needed to make amends in order to move on. I like that Jasper kept his promise to her, and I hope that they will all be able to move forward from this. You did a great job on this story. It was emotional and heart wrenching, but in a good way. Thanks for sharing.