Reviews for Dark Justice
Anissa0012 chapter 15 . 5/13
Writing is your true avocation, don't doubt it! This story is uncomfortable, but compelling. You have a fallback career if you ever want to give up security!
Anissa0012 chapter 5 . 5/12
"It would take a great deal of turmoil..." That was a beautifully-wrought sentence. Superb. (English teacher, here.) Your prose is elegant. Reading it is like enjoying fine Belgian chocolate.
aranow chapter 40 . 8/24/2016
Oh my goodness I just finished reading this I loved it. Thanks
SunniGummi chapter 40 . 2/13/2015
Noo, it's over :( But the ending was great and rounded up the entire tale just perfectly. While I hate to see that this story has come to an end, I have the feeling that the family is actually glad, hehe ;) It was a bumpy ride for sure.

Thank you for sharing your work with us and I am so looking forward to reading more from you! Esme and Rose are waiting *grins*
Keep the stories coming!
TwiFanfictionRecs chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
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chronos-girl chapter 40 . 1/19/2015
AAHHH! NOOOO! It's over? awww! I had to re-read chapter 39 to catch up and I can't deny that I'm still upset with Esme for being so accusatory and what have you towards Carlisle, but I understand her anger and sense of protection over her children, especially her boys.

Maybe you could make a simple one-shot of how Carlisle handled his grief or handled moving on from that scene in Dark Justice? Would be nice to know if Esme had to knock some sense into the man or "dun dun dun" call in Eleazar to handle the stubborn blonde. Haha. And since this is completed, I'll most likely toss this onto my kindle to read again while I fly to Japan in April. :D

I'm glad that the Hayfords are able to tolerate Jasper for their daughter's sake. That was good of them. Great story, as always! Can't wait to see what else you come up with. I hope you're feeling much better!
Jessiwazhere chapter 40 . 1/19/2015
This was such a good story and I can't wait to see what else's you come up with!
Catspector chapter 40 . 1/18/2015
Great story - thanks for the wonderful ride.
Guest chapter 40 . 1/16/2015
Guest chapter 40 . 1/16/2015 this is the way to end a great story! Thanks for the pleasure reading this.
Jessiwazhere chapter 13 . 1/15/2015
I do t agree with Jasper being sent away I think what Alice said would have worked just fine because where the earlier situations were kept between Father and son he suggestion would be between family and son
Cullen1007 chapter 40 . 1/15/2015
Thank you for sharing your truly remarkable and brilliant story.

Jasper has been on a long journey and it was great to experience his highs and lows and culminating in his new found positive mindset under Eleazar's guidance and influence.

All good things must come to an end and although it is sad to see the story ending, it has ended on a high note.

I will be re-reading it again and again.

Excellent job. I'll be looking forward to your new stories.
rubyblue100 chapter 40 . 1/14/2015
The end of an era...and the start of something new and wonderful for you. Thankyou for sharing this WONDERFUL story with us...were all sad the journey is over but looking forward to the next ones.

That ending was just Ya girl...xxxxxxxx
Dixie.f.9 chapter 40 . 1/14/2015
I have enjoyed your story. It's good to see Jasper finally feel like a full part of the family. Not just because of Alice. That him and Carlisle have finally grown close. Looking forward to the next story.
Cullen Cousin chapter 40 . 1/14/2015
What a wonderfull way to end the story! Loved the story, you did an excellent job!
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