Reviews for The Secret Rangers
ElvenHalfling chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
I like how your main girl characters are steadily getting strength as the years go by. It started with the Pirate Kelly in your Pirates story on FictionPress, and they've just steadily been getting more and more spunky. Me like. D

Love,
ElvenHalfling
ElvenHalfling chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Hey, loved it! Just to let you know, it says "Paste your document here..." under the chapter after it finishes. I don't know if that was intentional or not.

By the way, I read your other story too, and I loved it! Keep it up!

Love,
ElvenHalfling
TaylorLoe chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
You better write more! It's seems good so far so keep up the good work! The only thing I will say is that it might take more then rejection from the rangers corps to make someone want to wipe out the rangers and take over Araluan. Maybe try adding another reason further down the track like a ranger killed his father who was a thief or A ranger made the mistake of killing someone close to him some other way. But other then that the story seems really good! I am just trying to help. One more thing is that you spelled Araluan wrong.
TheMusicKnows chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Has potential..
Please update