That was really hard to follow and very confusing.

First word: WOW.

I understand this fiction has come to an end, but I thought that I might as well review something as good as this. This story produces a very well done story and plenty of details, something that you would see in a novel. The only problem I have with it is the forced realism into the world of Ratchet and Clank. While I highly agree with the decision. it would have been much better applied if it was edged in slowly. This problem is made up for, however, by the good plot. I am not a professional reviewer, though, so take everything I said with a grain of salt.

Despite your account's inactivity over the last year (and three years when it comes to this story), your writings still impress readers like me to this day.

Glad to see you back kinda liked it, my only real complaint is that I doubt The Bogon authorities would hesitate to blow the entire ship including civilians.

It's back! I'm so happy. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Excellent chapter friend! The space battle and the combat scenes were great! There is always room for improvement, but you got this down man. I look forward to the next chapter, and I hope it's as great as this one. Keep up the great job!

(Evil Ratchet Out!)

What an amazing chapter. I like how you dosplay the combat scenes, it seems so real.

Hot damn this is a great story especially this battle scene it was fantastically written and we'll paced keep up the good work my friend

This was a really good chapter. You write battle scenes extraordinarily well. Keep up the awesome work!

I am SO glad I discovered this story. I'm up to chapter 4... this is amazing and incredibly well done.

Once more, into the breaxch Shartans. I like this race alot. Peace is their first approach but they are more than ready back their intent with an iron fist. Space battle was also AAA job. Tossed me the read3r right into the fray. Rock on.

Ah so there are 3 factions. Tribunal, Imperial, and Shartan. Interesting. Eveb more intriguing is how you made a hive mind race interesting. Heck I kind of want to root for them

Lear is now in straight survival mode. Its very reader involving the way you show him evaluating his situation and then acting. Very enjoyable

And the plot thickens with the introduction of a villainous foe, and the first signs that something is terribly wrong with the universe. Enjoyed how this eased me into the main setting before adding a well placed cliffhanger at the end.

Intense. I really want to know more about the two seperate factions, at least I think it was two factions. Definitely brings to mind the hectic firefights in movies or a really well paced video game. Top notch job

Going back to read the story again and also to review all the chapters. With a story as good as this one, its a crime it hasnt been reviewed more