Good. He got her back. Well done.

I had to stop reading. The fuck? Sheldon was awful. Also, since when were they inlove? Please, please mark them as a pair if your going to make them a couple, because why would anyone expect fannon if it's not warned?

This is the dumbest most damaging ending possible. He decided that because he was upset at what he THOUGHT he saw, he had the right to eviscerate her and show her NO respect? And she forgives him because he kisses her and says I'm sorry? He needs to answer for what he's done and prove he's worthy of her trust. This is damaging shit.

I enjoy your writing but Sheldon is let off the hook WAY to easy. There was no excuse for Sheldon to behave that badly with limited information, even with his supposed lack of experience with human interaction. Almost any woman, especially a strong woman like Penny, would not have allowed him back without an explanation and some form of actual humility, even with a deep love for him,

This was great for a first attempt. Sheldon discovered he had emotions.
Charlie and Penny so much alike, dreamers. While Sheldon and Amy are alike rules and order. I love Charlie and he's what Amy needs like Sheldon needs Penny in his life. Like the other side of a coin to make them whole

Pretty good for a first fanfic! At first I thought Sheldon seemed OOC and over the top, but then I got the context of thinking he stood a chance with Penny and finding the guy in her bed. Poor Penny. But also poor Sheldon struggling to figure it all out.

I absolutely loved it!

damn...you made me cry AGAIN. how you keep comming up with all of these stories is a mystery to me. but i am so glad you do. thank you so much

Wow! Your first story!? Strong characterizations and classic misunderstanding gone completely awry. Now that is definitely one way to resolve a misunderstanding.

I don't know how I missed this one. Reading it after having read most if not all of your other work proves to me how good a writer you've always been.

Thank you this was a wonderful story

I felty my heart tighten when he said those cruel cruel words! Awesome story

So sad... :'( I cou I couldn't believe it anymore . I adored the whole story. :-) I adore the ending. I had never felt so sad . felt like crying like A 3 year old... continue to write stories like this one... an awesome author :-) :-) :-)! I LOVE YOU!

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Outstanding stories,keep up the good work