|Reviews for Undertow|
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 6/18
| Mary Eliza Von Teese chapter 1 . 1/12
Oh well. That do explains the: "I blur the boundaries of the concept of nakama and then gleefully run around."
It kinda feels weird... yet plausible...
Loved Robin's and Zoro's specially, though Nami's and Chopper's were really cute
| Frostbert chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
oh no, my heart, this one shot is too perfect and fantastically well written and it describes each and every one of their feelings perfect and I think I'm in love
| bakasaru264 chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
Of course Luffy knows! Even if he is a selfish, idiotic and stubborn bastard who think of nothing and but the safety and well-being of his nakamas! Goddamnit I am not crying at all...
| EndlessChains chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
A well done oneshot. I have to say that the title for this story is well done as it fits with what you are implying with the story. The angles from each of the Strawhats was well done and fits with their personalities well. Liked the explanation from all of them when they fell for their captain and that they would always feel such a way for him. It captured the family and love they all share but none more so than for their captain. It was enjoyable to read each of their feelings and to know they would do anything for Luffy. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
| ashlynhope28 chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
Luffy does have the ability to make anyone fall for him. Hell, I'm in love with Luffy myself. He's just so amazing in every single way. Oda has ruined me for life with his creation tbh.
| Riffs chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
| c0pypa5ted3lete chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
well that made me cry. i was smiling though so tears of joy? whatever. I hope you did well on your thesis :)
thanks for writing this heart-wrenching drabble
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Sooo they all Fallen...
So that's why the genre have 'romance' on it..
Well... It's Luffy after all...! XD
Even if he know, he wouldnot mind...
Not that he would think deep about it either...
| The voice of all things chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Wow! I absolutely love this! There's so much emotion here, and I love how you made the crew's love for Luffy seem so natural and unforced. It's hard to make characters like Sanji and Franky admit to caring for Luffy more than anyone else, but you handled their thoughts well.
Great work and so well written! Thanks for sharing this :D
| Tsuki107 chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Beautiful and touching story :) I loved it!
| Ssus chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
I think I've read this once before, but I didn't review so I'm doing it now. I love how you've captured all the moments. I don't usually read many one shots, but I'm really glad I read this one. The friendship between Luffy and the crew is special and there really are no words to descripe it, but I really like the word 'gravity'. It sounds right. Especially in the part with Zoro, the 'if he had wanted to' phrase fits perfectly. Love it. :)
| Recordatio001 chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
A fantastic story and a subtle but deep understanding of each and every member.
You captured the essence of their loyalty, dedication and most importantly, unconditional love for their captain in their own unique way and I loved the way you depicted this.
I can't wait to read more of your works!
| Pokabu chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Very lovely piece. I love how you described the emotions each character felt without giving it a name, and I think each little shot does justice to said character. Great work!
| BloodyWar2411 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I absolutely adore this. There's no better way of stating it. The way you described them, it's simply phenomenal. Good job, Dearie.