|Reviews for Tell Me A Story|
| LilyAvatarLotus chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Aww..really sweet and touching. Sadly, I don't think Yue will ever find another love although I'm pretty sure Sokka still loves her. Unless maybe La fell in love with her, dunno how that would work? Great fanfic!
| Snitchstar chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Wow! That was such an amazing story.:)
Typical Bolin. And Yue being there! That was great.
| ZuEra chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
This was so touching (: I loved it!
| Kanotari chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Amazing idea for a story. Bravo!
| Nye Terra chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
There are a few grammar mistakes, I noticed. An effective way of proofreading before publishing is to read your work backwards, sentence by sentence, so that you're reading words more than you are reading a story. Otherwise it's easy to skim.
More importantly, your piece is well done overall, but what you really need to try doing is placing your characters in their settings. By that, I mean that you should describe the Northern water tribe's city, how the air feels and makes your eyes watery and cold, how the air tastes, and the sounds of the wind, the party. Don't forget the puffs of condensation when the characters breathe and talk. Leave absolutely nothing to the imagination except what the characters will do next.
Hope this helps. By the way, I LOVE Legend of Korra.