Reviews for Memories Lies
PuppyKitten chapter 4 . 12/19/2014
Hey I love this and I know that this will be a good story just don't take to long ok but hey you can just tell that this story will turn out a-ma-zing
Momoko1030 chapter 4 . 12/7/2014

Okay, now on to my review. Sit down, it's going to be long. Let me start off by saying, that was a long chapter. Like SUPER long. Not that it was bad! More to read! And I enjoyed every moment of it. Okay, that guy, what the heck is up with that "greater than thou" dude? I FREAKING HATE HIM! He's awful! I hope he gets what he deserves sometime soon. "That actually hurt a little bit." A LITTLE BIT?! OHOHOHO, I'M SORRY MISTER, I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WERE A BASTARD! Actually, I did but seriously. He needs to get his butt kicked. And then, there's the girl, I actually like her for the most part. Especially with her amazing transformation! Sooooo pretty! But I am a bit confused on why she was kidnapping the reds? I know she wanted to help them and all but stealing them? Where was she taking them? If she succeeded would they never see their friends and siblings again? That kinda confused me. And then there's the stars of this story, the puffs and the ruffs! Ohohohohoho! Don't get me started. Blossom was so freaking badass when she fighting that cheetah thing! Oh wait! The cheetah! What was up with that guy?! I had a feeling she was the antelope girl but I might be wrong. I alao have a feeling cheetah was the friend the antelope was talking about but again, I might be wrong. But back to Blossom! She was sooo cool! I was fangirling at her awsomeness! Then the cloaked guy ruined it. THE JEEERRRK! Then, Brick! Oh my Brick. He was just-GORGEOUS! And he was protecting Blossom. Not because he wanted to but because he was being threatened to but still! Blossick! 3 Okay, but Brick tho. He was like equally if not more badass! He was so in the zone! His little remarks made me laugh. I was smiling like an idiot through out the whole thing. It was just beautiful. Then, again, THE CLOAKED GUY FREAKING RUINS IT! You can see why I'm not fond of him. So then Buttercup and Bubbles show uo. FINALLY! I was so happy when they came because I thought everything would be smooth sailing from there. How wrong was I. Oh yeah. The antelope girl stabbing Butch and Boomer. That was...strange. But it saves their behinds so I'm not complaining. Oh and when Butch and Boomer came in riding on the antelope, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XD I WAS DYING! That scene brought me so much happiness. And Boomer. Oh, Boomer. Llama-Yack? Priceless. And then when the girls mistakened the cloaked guy as an innocent guy and the Llama-Yack for a bad guy. I was screaming at my screen, YOU IDIOTS! I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART BUT YOU IDIOTS! Yeah. But the cloaked guy calling them airheads did not sit right with me either. I would have have backhanded his face with my ring hand. Once I get a ring. ANYWAY! Then there's the greens and blues just cracking me up. "Riding a girl"? I had to read that sentence three times before I cracked up. HOO MY GOODNESS! THAT. WAS. PRICELESS. Oh and then the little Boomubbles moment. Well, other than Bubbles thinking Boomer was Takashi, I was so enjoying it. Oh! Oh! Back track. Brick's iron grip on Blossom? SO MUCH YASSSSS! BLOSSICK! Okay, then when the greens were flying after the antelope and having...awkward situations. I. WAS. DYING. I SWEAR I COULDN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! XD Then with Bubbles and Boomer. Finally they got taller. It reminds me of me. I use to be be taller than everyone. But once I got into high school, people who use to be five inches shorter than me, ARE THE SAME HEIGHT AS ME OR TALLER! LIKE WHAT GROWING POTION DID YOU TAKE?! Okay, back to the story! The way Bubbles described Boomer. Sooooo amazing It really was poetic and I just ADORED it! Then they were spotted and I was like "Oh shit". Then the chapter ended and I was like WHAAAA?! SO SOON! I was so in the zone and it ended! Just like that! Bruh. But, it was long enough. Trust me. I'm just saying that because cliffhangers. CLIFFHANGERS! Them damn things. But ANYWAY! As far as criticism goes, like two or three spelling mistakes but that's really all I got. Amazing word choice, the grammar was magnificent, the imagery, don't get me started. I FREAKING LOVES EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS CHAPTER! So keep up the amazing work! I'm pretty sure I mentioned everything I wanted to mention. Might of left a few things out. That's okay! This review has gotten long enough. But anyway, love you, love your story, your art is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter! Okay, I'm done. Peace! :D
Magical Blazze chapter 2 . 11/29/2014
Haha don't like long chapters! I love them when the story is so interesting and I'm telling you right now this is gold. I totally will read more after finishing my book for school and you are really good at giving us a good setting and I love what you did with Momoko/Blossom here. Keep up the good work
IcebatofValikinRRBZ8 chapter 2 . 11/29/2014
Guest chapter 3 . 4/18/2014
Now we know why you havent written anything in a long time,write whenever you have free time
do not message account invalid chapter 3 . 4/15/2014
anne-english human form of sedusa
jason-anne's english crush
Momoko1030 chapter 3 . 2/22/2014
Okay, okay, okay. Ookkaayy. You better get comfortable because I gots a few things to say. First of all may I say that chapter was great? No I cannot. Because...IT WAS AH-MAZ-ING! GREAT DOESN'T EVEN BEGIN TO COVER IT! OH MY GOSH I FREAKING LOVED IT! Let me tell you, I was reading this chapter and I was so in the zone that once it ended I was like What?! It can't end like that! TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS! So many questions but I'm sure they'll all be answered soon. Hopeful. WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?! Okay, now I also have to say BBBRRRIIIICCCCKKKK! w HE WAS SOOO COOL! How he predicted everything and how he loves the feeling of being unpredictable. Per-fect. No. I just can't. That was beautiful. Let me just- *has emotional moment* I'm sorry. It was just so- *takes deep breathe and sighs* Okay. I'm done. Anyway! I just completely loved that! Then there's that weird face he does...I tries to imagine it. Now that's gonna haunted me in my nightmares for weeks. Ya...I died laughing at Boomer's and Butch's reaction to Brick completely losing it! XD Priceless! Then there's Butch and his nonmanly ponytail. Yep...Poor Butch. And hey lady! Guy can have ponytails *insert picture of Len here* and still look like a guy! A very cute guy in fact. Both Butch and Len. Okay, I'm getting off topic. XP What was I saying? Oh yeah! The whole suspense and mystery and beautiful! Even though it's killing me! Must know everything! I'll try to wait but my mind can't handle it. I'M DYING OVER HERE MAN! SHOW SOME BROTHERLY(even though I'm a girl and so are you)LOVE! Anyway, that's(I think) all I need to say. I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! And chocolate but that's besides the point. Seriously what am I saying? I'm weird, I'm sorry. UPDATE SOOOON! :D
Red-Phonix14 chapter 3 . 2/22/2014
You better... I missed you SO much! WAAAAAAAHHHHH! *still wailing!*
KissesFromButtercup312 chapter 2 . 1/29/2014
You updated on my birthday! o
Love the story, too
Red-Phonix14 chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
I want an update I am on the edge of my seat!
Red-Phonix14 chapter 2 . 12/21/2013
I love this story! Update soon.
toriorangeflower chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
Aww:'(. Write moooooo9ooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeee.
Momoko1030 chapter 2 . 11/6/2013
I HATE YOU! JK. JK. But seriously?! Authors! Anyway I LOVE VOCALOIDS! X3 (I dunno if u know that or not. I have a feeling I've told u before...) This chapter is amazing! VERY well written! :D I LOVE THIS VERSION ALREADY! Keep it up! Love your work! And update sooonnn! ;D
Momoko1030 chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Okay all so u dont get confused this is in fact ppgzmlpfimlover. Ill explain you the detail in a PM and second OH MY GOSH! SO LET ME TELL YOU I WAS WALKING INTO MY ROOM AND HEARD MY PHONE RING (i get notifications for emails and stuff) AND I LOOK AT MY EMAIL AND I SEE: Memories Lies Ch.2 and I was like HOLY CRAP! SHE UPDATED?! SHE UPDATED *FANGIRL FREAKOUT* I am SOOOO happy you updated! Oh and thanks! I can't wait to read it! I go on to read the first chapter! :D
CrescentDragon22 chapter 8 . 6/16/2013
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