This is so cliche. I know it dbz and thats expected here. But this story is do chore to read wnd oye just the first 5 chapters. We have started the story and there's one shit after another ratger than building up the story it felt more like we have been dropped somewhere middle of the story. Maybe if you created some moments to relax then this would have veen better. This read like highly streched bow string that was way past its limit that it broke.

Ugh Im fan of drama too. The moments between battle that people realise shit is going to blow up, they only have one choice which would be some difficult choice to make. But this- this is so fking cliche.

Is this gonna follow the trope of naruto only getting bits of memories when the storg demands it. Like he would be in a fight and loosing it, then suddenly bamf- he remembered something of his lifeand then instant power up and he defeated his opponent. You know like the cliche powerups trope, where mc gets beaten badly but suddenly gets power up and defeats his opponent. And then rinse and repeat this same trope

Huh what're the chances of this or another crossover with dragon ball happening again?

More, please.

not even fully into the chapter yet and i had to pause to laugh at the beatdown gohan took

started listening to the chapters at work, absolutely loving the dialogue! your descriptions of the fights are taking me back to the days id watch dbz on my tv in the afternoons after school! so hyped to see the og Brody movie plot too. thanks man!

‘Etta’ usually refers to girls. Pinkette, brunette, I don’t believe guys are referred in such

Well, if you ever want an excuse for anything really you could always blame it on the time machine or a side effect of it ripping through the space time continuum and granting access to otherworldly entities, such as another Android 21. But even then you'll never be able to justify the tingly back from universe 6.

Not really a big boulder. As was pointed out in the story, Goku was supposed to become a Saiyin god and other events were supposed to happen that didn't. Buu was supposed to be male and so on.

Simply have 21 and possibly others show up from another timeline too. Technically even another universe like number 6 would work.

So why don't they wish 18 to he human like in Canon to give her ability to have children back?

Looks like a wish to make her human is in the near future so she can feel again.

This reminds me. Earlier when Naruto fused with 16 it said he was losing his machine parts for the most part in the upgrade. Then suddenly he's saying and completely sure without trying that the Senzu bean won't heal him even if he's mostly flesh and blood.

Why? Why wouldn't it work for his non machinical body at the very least?

Naruto's anger for Hercule is weird. After all those years and over a guy who just couldn't accept what he was seeing and in denial because it was just so absurd. Naruto has so much disgust for the guy after 7 years and a family towards a guy he spent all of 2 minutes around?

Wow did my memory fail me big time. I completely blanked on the actual ages. Videl would already be born. In fact his wife left him in Canon I think. Whether it was after he was champ or after he got the credit for saving the world idk.

But she definitely is going to have a different life growing up.

Oh love the call back to GT move