Reviews for And The Devil Makes Three
xenascully chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
OMG THIS IS AMAZING.
Lolapola chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
This is really good - the first hallucination fic that actually made me think I would go insane too! Like, it never let up, even when he was starting to calm down, Lucifer was still there. Just felt really claustrophobic etc :) Also protective dean is awesome!
Cassandra-The Seer chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Wow... that was great *.* I mean, you got Lucifer perfectly. This attitude... everything and the whole Sam and Dean interaction. I feared that Lucifer POV wouldn't be as good as normal Sam POV but you got me. To read the thoughts of him only made me laugh harder and pity Sam even more.
But I really love Lucifer(or Hallucifer) from season 7.
You did a great job, with Metallica, the soup you even mentioned shark week So Dean wasn't the only one watching.
So, keep on the good work ;D
Sincerely
Cas-The Seer
fairyjensen chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
This was probably the most haunting fanfiction I've read yet about Sam and his hallucinations. I doubt I should have read this close to 2am... but this just kept me reading. You portrayed Lucifer so well!
Jimelda chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Oooh, this was nice and chilling. Just a small glimpse into the untold horrors I'm sure Lucifer forced upon Sam, but my heart goes out to the poor guy. At least he's got Dean there to keep him grounded.

It was interesting to read this entire fic from Lucifer's POV, you did an excellent job with his character, and it really gave us readers more insight into what was happening in Sam's mind.

Cheers,
Jimelda
criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
This... Oh this. There aren't words for how much I love this. You wrote everyone oh so perfectly and I was laughing and cringing and covering my mouth and staring with wide eyes at the computer screen. It was just oh-so-perfect. I can't even... I need a larger vocabularly for how amazing this is. Maybe I could invent some new words...?

At any rate, you wrote Lucifer spectacularly and the whole dynamic of Sam-Lucifer-Dean was brilliantly captured! I loved every single bit of this.

So much awesome contained in one story is fraking genius and you are amazing and I love you for writing it! It was not only a wonderful plot and exceptionally true to the show, but also extremely well-written and... have I said perfect? I have? Oh. Well that's because it is.

Just what I needed after a long, stressful day of tests and exams. Thank you for sharing this amazingness!
AvenaCookie chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Megafiled with Luci! Gosh I love you now you know that?! This was awesomly done and I just discovered this while searching on ffnet! Amazing! Seriously just amazing!
pandora jazz chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I'm exhausted just reading this story. You did a wonderful? job of having Lucifer torture Sam. I have to admit I'm glad that I didn't have to watch this scene, though you were very creative in finding ways for Sam to suffer.
I did love any moments Dean tried to help Sam and could understand why Sam also refused at times.
I was so glad! when Cas finally fixed Sam especially since he was the one that had hurt him.
I always love reading your stories and I'm sorry for the late review.
Hope all is well.
Until next time, take care.
BranchSuper chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Wow - you really bring out what Sam was going through with the hallucinations. And how dean was keeping him rooted in the present. Well done.

BTW: "je ne sais quoi" .
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
So very chilling...in a wonderful way! Loved the POV and how you delt with it, especially how you portrayed Dean.

Fave line: I let the sound fade slowly, like a dying scream.

...Awesomeness. Pure awesomeness.
sammynanci chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
This was INCREDIBLY,GRAND, BRILLIANT, AMAZING and super sadly! I do not have words to describe the quantity of sensations and emotions that I crossed reading this history. I was surprised to the beginning on having realized that it was reported by Lucifer but later I was absorbed completely in every line, in every phrase and in every attempt for making fall Sam happening of enjoying his evilness (because this Mark Pellegrino's Lucifer was brilliant) to suffering as one condemned for my love that was not deserving anything of what happened to it had wanted to see one more episode (or several) with Dean like witness of his hallucinations like that there was demonstrating the great major brother who can be and since to love his little brother but they have left us with the desires as so many other times because of it infinitely grateful with you for having made myself suffer, thrill and weep with the fondness, the worry and the Dean's fierce protection and not that to speak for transmitting the effort and the great will of the poor boy fighting against the devil in his head. I also love the dolphins, it had suffered as Sam if it had to see it. A masterpiece, a pleasure like always reading yourself, THANK YOU FOR WRITING!Hugs darling!Nanci from Argentina
ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
You really got how Sam's hallucinations of Lucifer got under his skin, seeing and hearing him was so real, and he got under my skin too, getting his kicks at the expense of Sam's sanity, just wanted to banish the guy and stop Sam suffering! And, as usual, you had Dean as the awesome big brother, desperately wanting to help Sam and trying his best but it's hard helping someone fight something only he can see but that didn't stop him. The ending was just perfect, Dean pulling Sam against him and helping him get some sleep, at least for the time being.
Perfection on a page :)
Visionairy chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Karen - Wow - remind me not to cross you! Your Lucifer is downright terrifying. More so than during the show, this gave me the creeps. I can't imagaine going through that and not reacting. But Sam is trying so hard to be normal for Dean. This was visceral. And I really liked the way Sam communicated to Lucifer without acknowledging him:

"So you're with me then?"

"Yeah, Dean. With you. All the way."

"Yeah, you damn well bet you are." The Warden looked upon my bestie as if love could conquer all.

Sammy took in a deep breath, and still looking The Warden in the eye – unblinking – said, "I'm not going anywhere." he flashed a gloating, almost evil smile.

"Neither am I, Sammy. Neither am I." Dean reached across the table and patted Sammy's hand approvingly. The Warden waved Grandma over, "Sweetheart, the check please."

I knew Sammy's words were meant for me, even if they were not spoken to my face. Damn it. So close and yet so far.

And great use of 'The Warden' for Dean - very appropriate from Lucifer's point of view.

Of course my favorite part was 'The brother zone'. : ) "Close your eyes, Sammy. I got this for now."

"Okay, Dean." Sammy closed his eyes, curling further against The Warden, all heavy and limp and languid.

"That's my boy," Dean said softly, wiggling an arm behind the kid and locking Sammy tight against him as he drifted off in half-sleep.

Amazing! Please write more soon!
skag trendy chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Wow! You have a very wild, creepy, expansive, mesmerising and terrifying imagination. You sure you're not ol'Luci in disguise? Lol!

Nice one shot hon.

Kind regards,
ST xxx
SPN Mum chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Poor Sam just can't quite get rid of Lucifer's influence for good. :( No matter how much he tries to ignore him, he keeps coming at Sam from all sides. Sometimes Dean happens to say or do the perfect thing to make Lucifer disappear, but it's only for a little while, and the length of time he's gone keeps getting shorter. One of these days, neither Dean nor Sam will be able to 'banish' him anymore. I dread that day! Great story! :D
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