|Reviews for Syrgja|
| thereisaredeemer chapter 37 . 4/8
I have so enjoyed this story, dark though it was at times. You bring a new life into the characters and portray them well. I can't help but ask, is the queen his mother?
| Angie2022 chapter 42 . 1/27
I do not know if a comment is meant to tell future readers if the story is worth their time (I always check comments before committing to a story) or if it is to meant to encourage the author..
I did like the story.
BUT the graphic descriptions of torture were way too much for me.
As they were mainly/only? the flashbacks to Lokis time with Thanos and therefore in Italics I simply skipped them.
I can only advise faint hearted readers to skip these parts. Thanos is cruel. That is kinda enough to know.
If the arc of a character demands torture I don't mind, the world is cruel, but I only need mentioned the fact, I just can't read these things. That is maybe only me..
It is really good though if they are possible to hop over because they stand out, like italics.
I DO really really like the story. The slow healing of Loki, the way and pace the individual character warm up to each other is sufficiently slow and believable, some scenes are absolutely wonderful and precious, some are heartbreaking and I did even cry a couple of times.
I would have loved a stronger emphasis on Loki in the future meeting the leader of Jotunheim, for reasons, but that is maybe the only thing I did really miss.
The lost son scene was extraordinarily ooc for Odin for me, but I like Odin being NOT the your-birthright-was-to-die guy, as that is ooc regarding Thor1 for me. Taking him by his shoulders and picking him up saying he loves him would have been sufficient.
I hope this wasn't too long or too negative.
| Lucy chapter 19 . 10/2/2022
I love the lotr/hobbit music. I listen to peter hollens lotr/hobbit soundtrack.
| WannaBeAShapeShifter chapter 15 . 8/30/2022
Wait wait wait. So. He even got raped... basically that's what I read out of this.
But it would be curious, to be desired and "loved" by Thanos, most probably one of the strongest beings in all the Universes.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2022
Hi LadyCharity! I first read Syrgja a decade ago, as it was still in the process of being updated. A lot has changed since then, but this remains one of my favorite works of fiction. It's incredibly emotional and so so well written- I have been chasing the high of my first readthrough ever since :) I don't know where you are now, but I hope you are well, and I want you to know that your creation has affected me deeply and I think about your writing all the time. It's a great comfort to me. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/25/2022
what the fuck is wrong with Clint. I get that he's mad about the mind control part and all the lives loki ruined, but the things he's saying are horrible and uncalled for. loki doesn't deserve torture for what he did in new York. I think he's very ooc, and sure, he wouldn't be able to be kind to loki or be around him, but he doesn't need to say that shit. just keep your distance from him and get him to leave as soon as possible or something.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2021
this is some of the worst writing of male characters that i have ever seen. no surprise the author is a woman. my god is it hard to read.
| Unknown chapter 22 . 9/25/2021
I liked it
| guiltypleasureffnet chapter 42 . 8/16/2021
this is the most amazing fic I have ever read
| Daughterofthesea chapter 42 . 7/31/2021
That was one of the best fanfictions that I have ever read! Like really amazing work! Thank u for sharing ur talent with us!
| Daughterofthesea chapter 40 . 7/30/2021
WHAT! NOOOOOOOOO! FUCK MY HEART HURTS! AHHHHHH!
| Guest chapter 42 . 7/29/2021
You don't understand, this is my comfort fic. I will never stop reading this over and over again. This masterpiece is better quite a few books I've read. Thanks so much for sharing it! God bless 3 :')
| Daughterofthesea chapter 37 . 7/25/2021
Wait, wait, wait so that has to be Loki's mom right!
| Daughterofthesea chapter 32 . 7/24/2021
I'm not crying your crying!
| Daughterofthesea chapter 26 . 7/24/2021