Reviews for Syrgja
The Pearl Maiden chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
A great chapter. I'm not a huge fan of Loki/Natasha. I'm not sure what you're entire plan is for the relationshp of these two, but I do like the fact that they respect each other. :)

But-I'm not gonna lie. I missed all the gutwrenching angst. ;)

Awesomely (it's a word) written chapter. :)
grossasstoenails chapter 8 . 10/8/2012
WasianGal chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
First of all...I spent all last night reading from Chapter 1 to 8. HAHA Then you make me pace back and forth, checking my mail every few hours because somehow I HAVE to believe you will update today. THEN when it actually does update I do this crazy hop skip dance...thing(making my husband raise his eyebrow).
Not only do I carry so many feels for this story but now I am flailing from the feels that commercial has given me. It carries so much more meaning since I read chapter 8 last night. *sigh*
haha Seriously I love everything about this. Bromance bromance and more bromance! Its perfect! And the Loki Whump stuff actually makes me cry but the scenes that come from it are so beautiful. I think I have problems! XD
You inspire me. Do you except fanart of your stories? That wolf needs to be drawn okay? I can only hope I'm the one for the job!
Who Says It's A Rebellion chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
I just loved the balcony scene, it was intense and it was kind of a breaking point for them where they start to have some respect for each other. Thanks for updating, hanging on to every word :)
Potkanka chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
One of the best chapters so far, I simply loved this conversation. Natasha is amazing though, being able to understand Loki with just him... glaring, staring... making faces XD I'd be probably totally lost :D
Whatever relationship they have right now, it seems to be on the right track, Tasha's really good at this kind of thing :) And Loki is still unpredictable and crazy but maybe not as much as it seemed at first...
Loved that little bit with the books at the end too :)

PS: So I watched the hotel commercial, it was beautiful! :)
Saela chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
In my opinion, you are most certainly up there with the 'rather well-known Avengers fanfic writers'! I love how you write Natasha and Loki, while keeping their 'friendship' (if I can call it that) completely plausible. Hope we'll get that long chapter soon ;-)!
DarkDragonne chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
Oh man I just love the interaction between these two. There's something alike between them, and in the movie itself I liked how their face off was a verbal battle rather than throwing punches. It really highlighted their personalities, and I'm glad you're doing it here too.

I'm a bit surprised there wasn't a flashback in this chapter (that hasn't happened for a while), but I'm guessing that's what you put in the next one?
Ordis chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
*Grins* And that Tasha, THAT is why you don't taunt mute former-would-be-dictators about their lack of options above 500ft drops ;) *Snickers*

Loki, I LOVE YOU! And your love of Thor's books. *hugs you*
Imaginarian chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
The actual cliffhanger scene. was. amazing.

Great chapter!
Dazja chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
That was unexpectedly adorable
Saffygirl chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
Seriously, you have no idea how welcome a new chapter was after the day I just had. Really, you are all sorts of wonderful right now. :)
Awesome chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!
perihelion12 chapter 8 . 10/8/2012
Sorry, so so sorry for the absence (again). Trust me, if it were up to me I would be reading your story at every opportunity, but alas, it is not. You really deserve readers with more ability to be consistent than me. Luckily people recognize your story is fantastically amazingly awesome and you have a whole crap ton of readers. :D

Anyway...I wasn't really expecting that whatever's hurting Loki would actually be something physical inside him, but I guess so (assuming that it does turn out to be the Mind Gem). It's awful...I mean, I should be used to it by now but the depth of the Chitauri's torture continues to horrify me. Poor, poor Loki, I just wish you would let them love you. I am glad to see Tony and Bruce being wonderful :D

I'm most happy about the fact that Thor was able to tell the others Loki's whole tragic story. They're gonna have to work together to deal with him now and I hope everyone will be more sympathetic now that they know what happened to him to lead him to do what he did. I also really liked the fact that Thor broke the coffee mug, and Steve's pajamas. Just lots of little details like that keep the characters real and makes a huge difference between good and bad stories. And yours is awesome. :D Anyway, sorry again for the appallingly long absence, and I am of course looking forward to more! :D
Funygirl38 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
I'm going to read more when I get the chance, heading to bed though...I like the story line, the descriptions are vivid. Definitely has my interest. I have a couple of suggestions that I noticed...and they are only suggestions..its something I try to do with my work...try to lead dialogue with context...for example,
"Well, we've got time for you to spill," said Tony. "I love story time." could be something like:
"Well, we've got time for you to spill," Tony pulled out a chair, straddled it backwards and took a sip of his coffee. "I love story time."
I noticed your use of the word "said" a lot, if you lead with context, like the character looking somewhere or doing an action, it flows a bit least that's what i've found...make sure of copycat phrases too close together too...that's one thing I always find myself doing...I'll write a paragraph or two and find I've used the same descriptive word twice, to me it's glaring and I have to change it Natasha grits her teeth quite a bit, she's going to need an orthodontist...I hope I haven't offended with my advice, I like your work. You have great description as I said. I will be back for more, keep writing..
Imaginarian chapter 8 . 10/6/2012
AAaaaah Steve in plaid pajamas Clint and Tony stealing drinks from each other Pepper charging Tony for the drinks Clint stole Natasha being wise Thor being an EXCELLENT big brother

The Mind Gem


Great chapter.
DarkDragonne chapter 8 . 10/5/2012
Yeah, go tear my heart out and replace it with painful feels. I legitimately have tears in my eyes right now.

I found this fic today, and it was incredibly compelling in an almost horrible way. It's darker, grittier, and more realistic than most any fanfic I've read, and it makes it both wonderful and difficult to read, in more ways than one.

And now that I've put myself through the emotional pain of reading this, I can only wait for the next chapter... And try not to die from my feels along the way.
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