|Reviews for Beyond Inappropriate|
| Judyblue95 chapter 65 . 8/13/2014
OK. I buy it. Hard though it may be, I can shift my clearly rigid ideals and go with the flow here. In my world, I saw them together because this is always something I wanted for myself. That you didn't name her husband or his wife leaves me with all kinds of mixed feelings here because I'm just so used to that pat ending. You made me laugh, cry, sob, and wet. This was a story I'll NEVER forget! I vaguely remember reading the first chapter when it was in the contest, but that was before I started keeping track of the stories I read. What you went and did with it was something else again, making it the most real, heartfelt, gut wrenching journey I think I've ever taken. Thank you again. I'm still crying but I get it.
| Judyblue95 chapter 62 . 8/13/2014
My heart is breaking right now. I'm a sappy, sobbing mess. You know I live vicariously through the stories I read, the best ones anyway, and I'm struggling big time with letting my hopes for them go. With this chapter, a small maybe has crept through, although I'm 99.9% convinced that it'll never happen. 3 more chapters to read.
| Judyblue95 chapter 57 . 8/13/2014
Ok. I'm crying now.
| Judyblue95 chapter 55 . 8/13/2014
I love that Bella is pitching forgiveness to Jasper. I love that I'm feeling the teeniest bit of hope that they will somehow stay together. Wouldn't that be lovely? Yes it would! I imagine the social pressure would be tremendous, so maybe it's not such a good idea, but it's an idea whose time has come!
| Judyblue95 chapter 54 . 8/13/2014
of course he has stamina! he's twenty fucking three! this is so delicious. I'm going to finish tonight. I can't stop...
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| Judyblue95 chapter 42 . 8/13/2014
oh man, I'm just buzzing through the chapters like a starving woman. Starved for affection...and this tete-a-tete is feeding me like crazy. I'm loving every bit of it. The starry-eyed idealist in me is wanting them to live happily ever after, with each other, with no complicating children or friends to mar the way. Sadly, I perceive that won't happen...
| Judyblue95 chapter 10 . 8/13/2014
I'm REALLY enjoying this email writing format of most of the last 9 chapters! I'm going to keep reading for as long as my eyes hold out...
| Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Oh man, girl! I am reading this story as I very much miss my regular dose of your writing! This story appeals to the cougar in me. I have, for many years, had fantasies about a few of my children's friends. One young man was 19 when I was 35 and I didn't go for it, even though HE very much wanted to...I'm really living vicariously here by reading this! It's fabulous so far. I may not comment every chapter, but will pop in from time to time...
| Emmaline3 chapter 65 . 6/15/2014
I think the whole 'thing' was beautiful! Life is an experience. Most of us are willing to experience normal, safe and sane ones...other's are so much braver, and allow their whole existence to ride along that silver knife of life, to the extreme.
Maybe next time 'round I'll be one of the brave ones.
Thank you for the 'experience' on paper... ;-)
| Emmaline3 chapter 14 . 6/12/2014
So very awkward, this middle situation... When is the next holiday? They need some togetherness. Soon...
| Emmaline3 chapter 4 . 6/12/2014
Young Edward has a 'self esteem' problem...not! ;-) Seriously, how is he so confident that Bella isn't going to shut him down, hard? 'Course, if my son brought his 'friend' into my single-mom-home, I might be cougaring him straight away if he were Ed...so, write on! lol
| my2galspal chapter 65 . 5/26/2014
Really enjoyed your story. It reminds us that HEA come in all shapes and sizes. Thanks so much for sharing it with the rest of us.
| blb1000 chapter 65 . 5/9/2014
Thank you! I enjoyed the whole thing.