Reviews for Beyond Inappropriate
Judyblue95 chapter 54 . 8/13/2014
of course he has stamina! he's twenty fucking three! this is so delicious. I'm going to finish tonight. I can't stop...
Judyblue95 chapter 50 . 8/13/2014
still here.
Judyblue95 chapter 46 . 8/13/2014
me!
Judyblue95 chapter 42 . 8/13/2014
oh man, I'm just buzzing through the chapters like a starving woman. Starved for affection...and this tete-a-tete is feeding me like crazy. I'm loving every bit of it. The starry-eyed idealist in me is wanting them to live happily ever after, with each other, with no complicating children or friends to mar the way. Sadly, I perceive that won't happen...
Judyblue95 chapter 10 . 8/13/2014
I'm REALLY enjoying this email writing format of most of the last 9 chapters! I'm going to keep reading for as long as my eyes hold out...
Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Oh man, girl! I am reading this story as I very much miss my regular dose of your writing! This story appeals to the cougar in me. I have, for many years, had fantasies about a few of my children's friends. One young man was 19 when I was 35 and I didn't go for it, even though HE very much wanted to...I'm really living vicariously here by reading this! It's fabulous so far. I may not comment every chapter, but will pop in from time to time...
Emmaline3 chapter 65 . 6/15/2014
I think the whole 'thing' was beautiful! Life is an experience. Most of us are willing to experience normal, safe and sane ones...other's are so much braver, and allow their whole existence to ride along that silver knife of life, to the extreme.
Maybe next time 'round I'll be one of the brave ones.
Thank you for the 'experience' on paper... ;-)
Emmaline3 chapter 14 . 6/12/2014
So very awkward, this middle situation... When is the next holiday? They need some togetherness. Soon...
Emmaline3 chapter 4 . 6/12/2014
Young Edward has a 'self esteem' problem...not! ;-) Seriously, how is he so confident that Bella isn't going to shut him down, hard? 'Course, if my son brought his 'friend' into my single-mom-home, I might be cougaring him straight away if he were Ed...so, write on! lol
my2galspal chapter 65 . 5/26/2014
Really enjoyed your story. It reminds us that HEA come in all shapes and sizes. Thanks so much for sharing it with the rest of us.
blb1000 chapter 65 . 5/9/2014
Thank you! I enjoyed the whole thing.
blb1000 chapter 64 . 5/9/2014
Very sweet letter. She's a writer. Where's her letter?
blb1000 chapter 62 . 5/9/2014
It's tough. It's fanfic. You want it to work out for them ... yet you can see how it cannot. Optional endings please!
blb1000 chapter 61 . 5/9/2014
And not obvious ... at all!
blb1000 chapter 57 . 5/9/2014
Sad, but true.
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