|Reviews for Bekah to the Rescue!|
| StarWarsSkyrim51 chapter 1 . 7/17
I liked the story.
| jinx1764 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Always awesome to have great girlfriends! Buyah!
From above, "I kicked over his kingdom 6 years ago..." Should be 'six'
Something I've noticed to watch out for-numbers under ten (and some people do this for under a hundred for really pickiness) should always be typed out, unless it's the time. I.E.-
Correct -2 a.m. or two o'clock
Incorrect -2 am or 2 o' clock or two am or 2 o' clock
Larger number can be in numerical form, but often the smaller ones less than a hundred are all written out for visual consistency. Or if you end up with- two 2 year-olds. That's better than-two two year-olds (unless you can figure out a better why to write it)
Numbers in fiction are funny things. The main thing is visual smoothness and consistency.