Reviews for Life Changes
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 6 . 5/20
The deflowering wasn't all that great definitely needed some homework before writing it
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 9 . 5/20
You forgot the after care.
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 1 . 5/19
I just came across this little gem and it sounds wonderful! So much so I look forward to reading more.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/17/2016
ok this story is has been ok so far but no way is a virgin young girl going to be ok with the room she walked into and just say ok no problem and let him do what he wants to her so i think she should of freaked out on him or at least been kinda scared of what he wants her to be
louanne61 chapter 4 . 10/17/2015
Victorian houses never had 3 stories. I know this because I live in one, its also big for that era with only 4 bedroom. Maybe a Victorian style. I wouldn't of thought Edward would leave his playroom door unlocked.
louanne61 chapter 3 . 10/17/2015
Really jealous when they have just met. She seems a little forward for someone so inexperienced.
louanne61 chapter 2 . 10/17/2015
I'm a mom of 5. If my parents or in-laws arranged for any of my 3 daughters to be betrothed is one of their friends grandson. I would have them out of their house in a heartbeat, as would my hubby. I can't understand why Charlie or Renee go along with it unless there is a dowry involved and they are short of money.
It was sweet that you had Edward go and watch her dance.
louanne61 chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
This should be interesting.
Guest chapter 17 . 12/29/2013
Love ur story
Clover1583 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
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Edward's spouse chapter 28 . 8/11/2013
excellent story.
michael.vandebroek chapter 28 . 8/10/2013
very good story I really like it.
Debbie White chapter 28 . 7/21/2013
Great story i loved it!
lilmstran chapter 28 . 3/9/2013
love it
Guest chapter 28 . 3/6/2013
cute
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