|Reviews for Ancient Kings|
| juventus chapter 18 . 5/25
Jeez! I love your story. I know that there is a little stuff to ask like the time of only 20 years. But anyway. I can hardly wait to know how this will be over. Will Loki be king of Jotunheim?
| Alexis chapter 18 . 2/27
Wow, this is a really good story! I don't know if you'll see this review anytime soon but I hope yu continue and soon :-)
| Hekka chapter 11 . 1/7
Eh? The very idea seemed to me quite promising, but your storyline replete with logical holes...
For example, when Lafey took Loki, Thor was twelve years old, but on the coronation, he must be more than a thousand years (according to the movie). But in your fic between these two events took only twenty years... And how Lafey came to the idea that bullying and torture are a way to earn someone's trust? And after that Loki said something about how "his people" need him? The same people that were his tormentors (and doesn't seem to be kept any affection for him - as he didn't kept any for them)?
Or how Loki can continue to love Odin and call himself as his son, after Odin just gave him to Lafey without any explanation or warning? Leave him all alone with "monsters" Asgard taught him to hate and afraid.
| Marvelite5Ever chapter 18 . 6/15/2014
Whoa dang o_o That was... abrupt... from a happy excursion of Loki with Thor, Sif and the Warriors 3 (which I am so glad are his friends in this story and don't hold his frost giant heritage against him) to an attack on Asgard by the frost giants... how did they get there, anyway? I thought Loki was the one who could open portals...
Thor's caring for Loki is very sweet, though. And Thor, shy? XD That's a new one! Loved what Loki did to get Thor and Sif on a horse together though lol.
Again though, yikes about this ending... looking forward to seeing what happens next! o_o
(Oh, and I'm so sorry it took me so long to read and review this chapter!)
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/26/2014
Yay! Updates! More please? I really need to find out what happens next.
| Ariyah's rider chapter 18 . 5/15/2014
It's back! Hooray! Great job, keep up the good work. I must say that Loki's last bit has me a little worried, well the whole attack has me worried, but that bit, watching the world burn, scary. Again, job well done.
| Lady Frost the warrior chapter 18 . 5/9/2014
This is not good on so many different levels of bad...
| Saramagician chapter 18 . 5/8/2014
OMG! Now what will happen? I hope Loki don't do anything reckless -like sacrifying himself to save everyone!- but knowing him, possibly that's exactly what he will do! Update sooon...
| pallyndrome chapter 18 . 5/7/2014
Whoa! I just found this story, and I skimmed a few chapters, and very much liked what I saw, then this latest section freaked me out! Please tell me this whole Asgard-being-attacked scene is a dream :(
| Ariyah's rider chapter 17 . 4/21/2014
So... I found this lovely thing while scouring the depths of the archive for a good story.
I found a gem.
And proceeded to read it, come to the end, and find myself in a small depression. It's not over, but the last update was in November last year. Don't know if you're still writing this, but please, I beg if you, do continue if you can. Me and my free time would be greatly indebted to you. This is a truly good story, it would be a shame if it ended there.
| Saramagician chapter 17 . 11/8/2013
OMG! It was wonderful! Very enjoyable! Talk between Odin and Loki was wonderful! I hope Loki never ever go back to Jotunheim! Update sooon...
| Phoenixofmyth chapter 17 . 11/7/2013
I love it when broken families get reunited! Thank you for updating. This was one of those cry because ots so sweet chapters. When odin started to cry... awwwwww!
| AsadLittleMuss chapter 17 . 11/4/2013
OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING! i loved this
| Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 17 . 11/3/2013
That talk between Loki and Odin was really touching. Great chapter!
| Lady Frost the warrior chapter 17 . 11/3/2013
With Thor 2 and this chapter I can't deal with my feelings right now...