Reviews for Through The Looking Glass
AshesAndDreams chapter 6 . 10/9/2012
Hi! I just wanted to say that I like you story pretty much
Anyway I hope you update soon. )
ravenscry21 chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
EEEEKKKKKKKKK so jello of hero
carciinoGenetiicii2t chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
*Is giddy you replied to my review* (I've never been responded to before and I'm just silly) Yes, Ciel needs some love too xD! (Ciel blushes like crazy this chapter. And the fluff, I love it! The fluff is mild but its still there!)

'"And yet as a 'child' I still receive and enjoy the benefits."' ... Did Ciel just admit that Hero is his friend with benefits o_o? xD! Can't wait to see the rest of The Jack the Ripper ark!
Yami Mizuna chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
Woot!
FallenOkami chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
Gender bender! (Okami: -smacks the crazy person up side the head- shut up about that) meanie well in ways great job an the undertaker scene and I loved her coffin idea! (Okami: I want mine to be made from cherrywood painted black with a lighting bolt an a white wolf in fornt of it) can't wait until the corest scene XD epic false advertisement of CielxSeb yaoi fandom! (Okami: ewww!)

Love fallen&okami
FallenOkami chapter 5 . 10/3/2012
:O hero is a time traveling witch! (Okami-face palms- what is with you an witchesxdemons/vampire pairings?!) there more demons/vampire human pairing out there than witches pairings but it's just my theory (Okami:please pay no mind to Fallen she is a idiot) am not! (Okami: Mmm undertaker is my fav. Grim reaper although I keep picturing him as Jack Skealington from Nightmare before Christmas) She does an I can picture it! (Okami: please continue with this story we will be happy to read the next chapter an anything Fallen says that is stupid ingore her)
Love always Fallen&Okami
VampireSiren chapter 2 . 10/3/2012
Amazing! Can't wait for more adventures with Detective Hero XD
Kai'ika95 chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
Yay! I can hardly wait until the next chapter:D
2pacand2chainz chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
pretty good needs work
2pacand2chainz chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
Update soon! This was interesting! And Hero climbing the tree trying to fetch the cat was funny. And her naming the cat Moriarty...lol. And her teaching the kids baseball was awesome too. Marlins rock! 68-92 rceord
AngelSayori chapter 5 . 10/1/2012
I was surprised when you decided to incorporate this chapter. Hero sure is sneaky with her laughing :P. What surprised me the most is when You decided to even show us a bit of how the day went. I haven't read a single fic where they develop it a little bit. She's so nice for teaching the kids baseball :D. GO GIRLS! And Ciel and Sebastian learns a little bit more about Hero. Hmmm, I'm also wondering what happened those five years... We need another detective to crack this mystery! Joking :P. I'll be patient and wait. For the previous chapter I went and looked up what was the song and I laughed so hard when I saw the dancing. I can't believe she danced that in front of them. HAHAHA! On my, cramp! I can't wait to see Hero dancing some sexy Lady Gaga, if she does :3. Yay! Jack the Ripper arc! It's one of my favourite arc with the circus. I can't WAIT for when Hero meets the Undertaker(well she already knows him, but you know what I mean) and... pffff haha, when Ciel has to dress as a girl and even better, THE CORSET SCENE! Hahaha! Anyway, love the story. UPDATE soon w
carciinoGenetiicii2t chapter 5 . 10/1/2012
I adore moments with Ciel and Hero :3
Although because of the demon mate thingy with Sebastian, the chances of Hero and Ciel getting together are slim to none, darn x3
Anyways, I loved the long chapter! Keep up the good work, I quite like this story so far.
VampireSiren chapter 5 . 10/1/2012
Wow! Quick update! XD

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...GYAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA! OMG, I loved the Willy Wonka and Sleepy Hollow references! XD

Hero REALLY tormented Sebastian big time by eating the decapitated chocolate head, too!
VampireSiren chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
So dark yet humorous! :)
AngelSayori chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
Awww, what was that horrible dream :( she had? Is it a premonition or something? I didn't know Hero liked girly frilly things. I thought she was a tomboy ish type, but every girl has to have a girly moment I guess :P. I personally do not like Elizabeth. She's annoying as hell, but I'm happy that Hero and her are getting friendly. Is she oblivious to the signs Ciel is giving her? Not that I don't like it I find it rather cute. I love innocent characters. They're so adorable :3. I like the part where she says the same thing to Grell. It was funny. I wonder how Grell we'll react when he's in his true form. That mark section really caught my attention. Sebastian is a rather possessive guy. I can't wait to know more about the mark, but... That does increases the competition with Ciel... Honhonhonhon(France laugh) that's purrrrfect. I was so happy when Hero showed hoe we dance today. I like when the OC shows things from the futur. I alway like the reaction the characters have :). You should make Hero show some... provacative dance ;), but that would be a bit out of character for her :P. Oof, had a lot to say XD. Anyway, this story is real good. UPDATE soon! w
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