Reviews for Defeated
TallyHo chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Great read. I thought it a believably realistic "could have" for what happened the morning after the party. I had always hated the portrayal of alcohol consumption by the gallon with virtually no effect and Naomi crawling to the bushes to throw up seemed very likely.
Also your portrayal of the characters thoughts and emotions was spot on. Hope to see more from you.