|Reviews for Heartless Hero|
| tunneling is fun chapter 5 . 11/11/2012
Hey, oops sorry I didn't review on a ton of chaps but I lost my password. Again. So keep on writing and don't let me down! :)
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2012
what whoa talk about a freaking cliff hanger! not cool not cool at all. YOU MUST UPDAT IMEADIATELY OR BE THREATENED BY A SPORK! but serously update update update!
| sym spidey chapter 5 . 10/9/2012
Quote: Sym Spidey: That makes... let's see... three threats? Four threats? Thanks for letting me know what it was this time so I didn't have to google it! And pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease don't shoot me. Or bomb me. Or any of the other things you threatened. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Me: don't worry if you lose motavation i planted some c4 all across the US :D (if you don't know what C4 is the 2 things 1 . 2 it's a bomb that i can set of with a switch, imagine TNT but with a detonate button instead of a fuse...the part that you light to make the red stick go boom)
| Sleekpelt chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
By the way your story is like reeeeeeaaaaaaaly awesome!
I also checked grammatical errors on my story and you were right there were a lot! Thanks!
Good luck on the story!
| Sleekpelt chapter 6 . 10/9/2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
whew! my face was turning blue there i could feel it. what i meant was:
YOU CAN'T STOP WRITING THIS I WAITED FOR MONTHS TO GET HEAR YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING!
whew!*gasp* *pant* *pant* i think if i keep yelling ill suffocate myself!
I love this story! I cant wait until the next chapter comes out!
By the way will you post my name sleekpelt in the next chapter so i know your reading this?
Also i think you might like my story ARTEMIS FOWL-TALENT? search it and read it. after reveiw.
Love love love this story.
CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN'T WAAAAAAAAAIT FOOOOOOOOOOR THEEEEEEEEE NEEEEEXT CHAPTEEEEEEEER!
*gasp* *pant* *pant*
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/9/2012
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/8/2012
i just read your story and it is fricken amazing! so hurry up and update and to heck what other people think, maybe they just dont know how to put the awesomeness of the story into words. so update!
| Falling without You chapter 6 . 10/8/2012
NOOOOOOOO! dont do it! its not worth it! update please! kind of dying here waiting for a update! come on please?
| fanficaddict94 chapter 6 . 10/8/2012
PLEASE,PLEASE continue! Its soooo good! You left a huge cliffie! What happens to Artemis? Has Holly forgotten about him?
| D Tull chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
Don't stop! This is a great story!
| Xodiac 451 chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
If you don't update I will steal all of your shoelaces, all the vecro in your house, and fill all of your with opened cans of cat food.
You have been warned.
| sym spidey chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
(aims AA-12 at author)...(it's an automatic shotgun .) you will die if you don't contine this story :D
| Sleekpelt chapter 4 . 9/23/2012
Who is the girl? Personally I'm guessing alyssa
| Falling without You chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! why did it have to end like this! (excessive amount of exclamation points!).
sorry to here about you being so busy, :( But I hope Artemis and Holly end up back together. I think that Alyssa could fall in love w/ Artemis but then realizes its more like a sibling relationship, but it's your story so do what you want! Can't wait for the next update!
Falling without You
| Sleekpelt chapter 4 . 9/19/2012
I think it should be Alyssa who found a Way To Use Her power to get to Artemis.