Reviews for Astral Disaster
Lady foxfire 8 chapter 3 . 8/25
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Demitri-Landgravate chapter 3 . 10/18/2015
damn! This is a really good story! Keep it up please .
Guest chapter 3 . 7/13/2015
so astral wasn't real! i hated it and loved it and you all at once.
binabella chapter 3 . 4/25/2015
I love your story!
Please update again!
I Have to know what Happen between austral and Yuma.
Please!
solitaireseraphim.silvertaciturn chapter 3 . 4/6/2015
Poor Yuma...Can Asutoru win his heart and gain his trust back again? Please can you continue this till it end?
Ryu-Ran 2200 chapter 3 . 2/28/2015
Don't worry about the translations, I know they're right because I watch the anime with english subs and I picked up the Japanese I can speak that way. I know the translations are right because I looked up the words myself as well. Great story be the way, very harsh but good. Keep up the good work
Ryu-Ran 2200 chapter 2 . 2/28/2015
That's just harsh. Why would some what to do that to Yuma? It's safe to say that none of this happened in the anime. Because if it did, it would be the meanest harshest amine I've ever seen. And Yu-Gi-Oh is my life be the way. Good story so far by the way too
ObsessedYugiohfan chapter 3 . 2/21/2015
Hah, Astral- or um, Asutoraru, live at 99 kame apartments. 99, hah, i get it XD
That chase seen though, you had my eyes glued to the screen. My heart jumped out of my chest when Yuma started to run away.
Amazing chapter. Can't wait to see it update... if that ever happens. If it doesn't it is okay. You're writing is amazing just the same :D
ObsessedYugiohfan chapter 2 . 2/21/2015
He's human?!
Astral, explain yourself! What is going on? Yuma, go find him right now and get some answers!
ObsessedYugiohfan chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
You know a story is going to be good when around 3 of my friends tell me to go read it.
Hey there, I'm ObsessedYugiohfan. Long name, so you can just call me Taylor. I just read the first chapter of your story. You made me cry :( Though by reading you ending little comment, Astral is dead, thank goodness
Can't wait to read more.
First story I've read since coming to Fanfiction and I love it :D
Yugiohfan chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
Cool story man!
Best Yuma and Astral story I've read on this whole site! Hope you continue though. I see you haven't updated in a while, so you probably won't again, will ya?
Shame :( I wish I could read more
PleadingReviewer chapter 3 . 2/21/2015
Hello there, I'm not sure if you are continuing this story or not, but if you are...
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! I've never read a story this amazing before. :D It is beautiful.
And your style of writing is absolutely awesome! I can just feel the emotion and excitement from it. Plus, i love the plot. It is so original and just downright heart warming.
Granted, I'm a little angry at Astral too for lying, but I'm also dying to know why he did it.
If you continue I would love to read more! Thank you for blessing me with such an awesome story!
Hikaridragon001 chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
Hi! I just wanna ask when this will continue? I really love this story and ship yuma and astral. It's almost been a year since you updated and I been waiting and checking this story once a week ever since I read it. Again I really love it and it would be a shame if it didn't continue and if your busy with other stuff sorry. I know it's kinda hard to update this while doing work from school or college even a job. So again sorry. Hope you update soon.
Hikaridragon101 chapter 3 . 7/11/2014
This is by far the best keyshipping story I have read! Please continue! Please , I noticed you haven't written for almost a year. But please continue. I love it!
Kiko12350 chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Will u update this book? I really enjoy it
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