Reviews for The Next Phase
lundyred chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
I feel for Leah because she has not talked to her mom and what does her mom do but bring up their wedding! Leah was right to leave and I would never go back: I don't think Sue cared about Leah anyways.
Sailaranel chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I'm glad that Leah seems to have found some peace in your story- even if it is away from her family. You portrayed the continual pain of being on the res well, how in the peace between vamp and wolves, it hadn't brought her any.
CatTheWall chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Leah is my favorite wolf! Are you going to add to this story?
tracyluvstwilight2010 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
loved it.
hgmsnoopy chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Will there be more or is this a one shot? Loved it, you really captured the feeling of her making her escape.

And thank you for noticing that you have to take a ferry to Canada from the Olympic Peninsula, rather than just running north. That's one of my biggest pet peeves of the book. ;-)
bmthespian chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Great chapter. Is this a one shot or are you going to continue?
Clara Meliza chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Reading from Leah Clearwater's point of view sure has a way of taking my heart and grinding it into hamburger.
Haddopa chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Love this tory so much. Nice descriptionaly words (I don't think descriptionaly is a word or that i spelt it right). Wish I could write a story as good as yours!