|Reviews for Cliff Hanger|
| SodiumLamp0nAHill chapter 4 . 9/2
Not bad. The first chapter was pretty hard to read/follow, but it got better as the story progressed. Good story on one of the harder aspects of being a parent; discipline and punishment of today is a far cry from what it used to be (to our society's detriment). You did a good, tactful job of writing!
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/13
| accounting professional chapter 4 . 2/7
Great chapter. I loved how Lucus was firm but loving.
| accounting professional chapter 3 . 2/7
Great chapter. I loved the interaction.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/30
Love Rifleman and good Lucas stories. Your story is good. I think you need a beta. So many words spelled wrong and not used right. Everybody makes mistakes and needs help. Just ask for help to make it read better.
| wandamarie chapter 4 . 1/30
the did earn that spanking thanks
| IMSLES chapter 3 . 1/26
I know Mark wanted to keep his friend from possible harm, but he really should've been smarter about it. No doubt he'll agree with me soon enough.
As for Billy... it's right nice that Lucas wants to step up and treat him like he will his own son.
Dinner will an interesting event, though I'm sure the boys won't find it too comfortable.
| wandamarie chapter 3 . 1/25
please up date when you can thank you
| Jasper's Mom chapter 3 . 1/25
Oh my, what trouble those kids can get into. I could see the fire and sparks coming from Lucas'' eyes. I think more fire will be coming from two boys backsides soon. They totally deserve it!
| fan of rifleman chapter 2 . 1/8
This was good. I like that you have McCain punish Mark. Boys back then would have gotten a good tanning for that. The sissy tv show couldn't have Mark be whipped as a boy would have back then. Pa would have done just as you wrote. Love to see more where Mark got his britches tanned and where Micah tanned Billy too. keep writing rifleman.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
Awesome, please write more of Mark and Lucas
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/18/2015
OMG, I loved this, good job. Please write more
| Sierra Rose 22 chapter 2 . 11/29/2014
I always enjoyed The Rifleman, and you gave us a good story with Mark and his friend.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/23/2014
Loved this story, would love to see more. Thanks so much for writing it, love the era!
| accounting professional chapter 2 . 11/23/2014
Great chapter. I loved how both boys received loving disciple.