|Reviews for The First Casualty of War|
| Syl chapter 31 . 6/25
| ginnyginny chapter 29 . 6/20
I'd like to respond here as a mom who's youngest son was born at 29weeks, and at 11 years old is doin g very well. Babies born at 32 weeks almost always live unless there is another problem. At this point in development they can breAthe outside the womb and have few problems regulating their temperature. My son was sent home at 32 weeks gestation. Read up people
| Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 31 . 4/18
What a great story! I love the plot, as it is so different from a large majority of HP stories on here. I was glad Severus was only partially obliviated and that Hermione and her son survived. I would gladly add this to my favorites, but I have very strict guidelines of what makes it on that list and one of them involves spellcheck... I would suggest finding a beta to help find all the spelling errors and typos. The story was great and it was not too riddled with errors, however I think it would make this story even better if you worked out the kinks a little more. Nicely done and thank you so much for sharing!
| lunajen chapter 32 . 1/24
| riskeybusiness chapter 31 . 1/16
I literally couldn't stop reading. It was beautifully written and moved me to tears several times. A clever plot line and all round amazing. Thanks for sharing :)
| LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 31 . 9/4/2014
| CaramelMonkPA chapter 11 . 6/8/2014
Although I feel sorry for the way Ron turned out in this story, I enjoy the art therapy and cancer-battling angles. Thanks!
| LuresaSWTOR chapter 7 . 3/27/2014
Ch. 7: So far everything I have read has been absolutely beautifully written. I have bawled through most of the chapters because, well, they are very emotional. The degree of intense emotions that you are able to express in this story, and the pain of that emotion is just phenomenal. Your writing is just exquisite. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. Oh, and Ron is a toad!
| Mary-Sue chapter 31 . 3/6/2014
Sweetness! Lovableness! Philip is adorable! Bravo! Brava! Whatever! I really did like this story. It's got a great plot, and while you've turned Ron into something I can honestly despise, instead of being that rather pitiful whiner, this is an amazing story. Actually, I think I prefer despising him over being all pitiful for him. He never did deserve Hermione, and Snape is AWESOME!
| Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf chapter 31 . 1/30/2014
Wonderfully written. Almost TOO believably realistic; there was just so much sadness at times it hurt to read and I worried of happy endings. Thankfully (for my poor happily-after craving self) you pulled it off despite the difficult path.
I'm left with a lot of questions as to what happened with supporting cast, but overall I rather enjoyed this piece.
Thanks for writing.
| Cosmyk Angel chapter 31 . 8/8/2013
I really enjoyed this story. It was plausible and well researched. I have always questioned what Hermione saw in Ron, so this was a pleasant alternative. I also liked the fact that the romance was tasteful. While I occasionally like to read a story with more graphic relationship scenes, that is not what this story is about, an I am glad you didn't put any hard core stuff into the story. I think it would definitely have detracted from the real story. This one isdefinitely a new favorite.
| SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 31 . 7/18/2013
Brilliant story. I love it. :)
| randomgerman chapter 31 . 7/8/2013
I love love love this story. It is about deep, meaningfull subjects and really touched my heart with the hope and love it shows even in life's darkest moments. Thank you for sharing this with us!
| ReDish chapter 31 . 6/20/2013
Lovely story. Thank you.
| DoraLupinTonks chapter 31 . 5/31/2013
wow...thats a nice story! beautifully written!