|Reviews for The First Casualty of War|
| lunajen chapter 32 . 1/24
| riskeybusiness chapter 31 . 1/16
I literally couldn't stop reading. It was beautifully written and moved me to tears several times. A clever plot line and all round amazing. Thanks for sharing :)
| LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 31 . 9/4/2014
| CaramelMonkPA chapter 11 . 6/8/2014
Although I feel sorry for the way Ron turned out in this story, I enjoy the art therapy and cancer-battling angles. Thanks!
| LuresaSWTOR chapter 7 . 3/27/2014
Ch. 7: So far everything I have read has been absolutely beautifully written. I have bawled through most of the chapters because, well, they are very emotional. The degree of intense emotions that you are able to express in this story, and the pain of that emotion is just phenomenal. Your writing is just exquisite. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. Oh, and Ron is a toad!
| Mary-Sue chapter 31 . 3/6/2014
Sweetness! Lovableness! Philip is adorable! Bravo! Brava! Whatever! I really did like this story. It's got a great plot, and while you've turned Ron into something I can honestly despise, instead of being that rather pitiful whiner, this is an amazing story. Actually, I think I prefer despising him over being all pitiful for him. He never did deserve Hermione, and Snape is AWESOME!
| Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf chapter 31 . 1/30/2014
Wonderfully written. Almost TOO believably realistic; there was just so much sadness at times it hurt to read and I worried of happy endings. Thankfully (for my poor happily-after craving self) you pulled it off despite the difficult path.
I'm left with a lot of questions as to what happened with supporting cast, but overall I rather enjoyed this piece.
Thanks for writing.
| Cosmyk Angel chapter 31 . 8/8/2013
I really enjoyed this story. It was plausible and well researched. I have always questioned what Hermione saw in Ron, so this was a pleasant alternative. I also liked the fact that the romance was tasteful. While I occasionally like to read a story with more graphic relationship scenes, that is not what this story is about, an I am glad you didn't put any hard core stuff into the story. I think it would definitely have detracted from the real story. This one isdefinitely a new favorite.
| SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 31 . 7/18/2013
Brilliant story. I love it. :)
| randomgerman chapter 31 . 7/8/2013
I love love love this story. It is about deep, meaningfull subjects and really touched my heart with the hope and love it shows even in life's darkest moments. Thank you for sharing this with us!
| ReDish chapter 31 . 6/20/2013
Lovely story. Thank you.
| DoraLupinTonks chapter 31 . 5/31/2013
wow...thats a nice story! beautifully written!
| V2NE chapter 31 . 3/24/2013
Aww this story was heartbreaking and heart warming! I tryely enjoyed reading it
| Dana chapter 31 . 3/18/2013
Things had fallen into place and created a world where smiling took no effort, and he no longer cared who saw him do it. ***
Thank you for this beautiful ending.
| Dana chapter 19 . 3/18/2013
He swiftly kneeled down and pressed a quick kiss to her growing abdomen before he began to whisper to their baby.
"I know that you won't be able to hear me for another nine weeks or so, but I just want you to know that your daddy loves you," he said quietly before running his fingers lightly over her skin.
Softie-Snape :D I love it.