|Reviews for Hurt Me|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
| kapurisudesu chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
like? no. love? ABSO-FUCKIN-LOUTLY! OwO
I fucking loved this! and I really like you're style... smooth dude cause the two are HAWT! **
Can't wait for you're next update!
K-chan xxx :3
| Kaija115 chapter 3 . 7/10/2013
I enjoyed this, would you be so kind as to continue?
| Mizuki 8D chapter 3 . 4/6/2013
LOVED IT MORE PLEASE!
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/9/2012
TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY! SERIOUSLY! AND YES! THERE SHOULD BE A ROUND TWO! TEEHEE! SERIOUSLY LOVELY! Besides some couple of errors here and there... IT IS NOTHING TO WORRY ABOUT! TOTALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU MEAN! ... except for "FWB" ... ... I don't know what that means... so if you could, will you tell? I know I'm going to feel like an idiot once I find out... but for life of me... I can't seem to figure it out... well at least not right now... ... it could take awhile... I'm not one to figure some things out immediately... I LIVE A SHELTERED LIFE! SO YOU CAN SEE WHY IT COULD TAKE AWHILE! TEEHEE! XD I WOULD TOTALLY APPRECIATE IT IF YOU TELL ME SERIOUSLY! AND with that all said I'll end here and I'll be waiting for your next wonderful and seriously lovely chapter! So until then YOU SERIOUSLY AWESOME AND WONDERFULLY AMAZING WRITER!
Your new FAN-READER! Anna 3
| XxZessxX chapter 3 . 11/9/2012
You need feedback well here it comes:
I love it!
I was afraid that it would turn into something Master/Slave-like-thing but I'm so damn glad it didn't :D
Friends with benifits *smirk* The idea is really cool.
So Will is still with Layla? What would she think if she knew her boyfriend and the hot head have sex *laugh* Oh I would like to see that face xD
My absolute favourite frase in the chapter, no till now the whole story, is "Warren, beeing the sex god himself..." xD I can't stop laughing about it and I have no idea why But that's so great "beeing the sex god himself" xD LMAO
And Will sneak out of his room to go to Warren? Sweet!
How will he explain it if his parents find him out of his bed? Well, I already thought that Steve won't be so happy about Warren.
I think you're right, the scenes aren't as graphic as you could have made them. I mean hey, nothing really bad happens. But I think you found a good level for it. I like the way you discribed it.
I'm so happy that you continue the story :D
So... because I don't really know what to say I'm stop here and wait curious for more ;)
| hovanic chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
Please post the next chapter. I understand your concern but there are some of us that love this kind of stuff and are just dieing to know what happens next :D
| milkchocolatehot64 chapter 2 . 10/4/2012
jus change it to M and everything wil lbe alright.
| Foxy Roxy Green chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
SHAME ON YOU! MINORS GET ON THIS SITE (i actually think the majority of this site is comprised of minors) AND THE CHARACTERS IN THE STORY ARE MINORS AS WELL. THIS IS COMPLETELY ILLEGAL! IT WOULD BE A DIFFERENT STORY IF YOU HAD MADE THEM OVER 18 AND LABELED THE STORY AS MA (Mature Audience, 18), BUT YOU DID NOT. AS A MATTER OF FACT, YOU DIDN'T EVEN LABEL IT M! YOU LABELED IT T! I DON'T CARE IF YOU ARE A MINOR YOURSELF OR NOT! I AM REPORTING THIS PIECE OF PEDOFILIC GARBAGE FOR ILLEGAL CONTENT! AND I WILL BE REVIEWING ANY OTHER STORIES YOU MAY HAVE UP!
P.S. Yes, I know how the cap lock button works, I was only using all caps as an emphasis for how irate I am. Thank you very much.
| Livelygirl838 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Loved the ending hated that it ended. And c for wat to do with the story
| nieka1995901 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
LOL that was sooo unexpected! I loved it! Good job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
continue the story
| XxZessxX chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
I like the sadism/masochism thing really (well actually only if it's Will/Warren)! You definitely should write more chapters! Just have your fun with the two ;D
Get caught or not? Hard question. On the one side I think it would be funny and interesting if they got caught but I really want to read what they'll do *grin*
So I say finish the sex scene and write more chapters. But let them get caugth in some later chapter!
Maybe from Wills parents xD That would be awesome *laugh* *dream* *hope*
I would pay to see the Comanders face when he caught his 'innocent' son and his arch enemys son while they have really brutal, passionate, nearly violent sex!
Till now I have not found a single Ff where Wills parents get to know Warren as his boyfriend (you see there's a need for this!).
But please don't feel threated or something. It was just an idea. (If I like a fiction my mind starts to imagine 'what could happen'-scenarios, so it's normal for me xD)
I just read one other fiction with Warren/Will sadism/masochism! So I hope you continue this :D I will follow the story!
Hope to read you soon ;D