Reviews for The Place
NiekaWow chapter 3 . 9/14/2012
Oooooo creepy! And Maltara all at the same time! :D I miss Kemy so much :( and Kai's just being... Well, Kai.. :P well done! I'm really excited for the next chapter!
Crimson Endings chapter 3 . 9/14/2012
Yay,Ken's save!

Ha ha,Kai:)So so weird
& funny!


How did Mal's car get there?

Anonymizz334 chapter 3 . 9/14/2012
Ohhhh I loved it! Especially the maltara! love love loveee
wheniseeyoursmile chapter 2 . 9/12/2012
Okay...four things.

1.) Aww! Maltara! That was way to adorable for words! Loved it! Mal is such a sweetie.

2.) THAT WAS SCARY! Wow that seriously creeped me out! Nice job on the scare factor!

3.) Ken! I loved how you included Ken! He's still here in our hearts. :')

4.) Kai-Kadoodle! Adore him in every way, that cutie! :)

mozzi-girl chapter 2 . 9/12/2012
Ookkaayy... Scary figure in the window creeped the hell out of me xD

- Molly
NiekaWow chapter 2 . 9/12/2012
Yay! Mal forgave Natara! This kinda reminds me of The Hunger Games... Somehow, but maybe that's just coz I finished the last book and it's all I can think about atm O_O anyway, yet again, a brilliant chapter! Keep up the good work! :D
Crimson Endings chapter 2 . 9/12/2012
Wow,that's a crazy house!

Yay!They made up:)

Great chapter,Jade:)

Of Jumbled Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Whooooaaaa. What did Natara see? This is good...…
Crimson Endings chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
I like this so far,Jade!
This is great for your
first horror story:)

Oh no,What could it
be?Can't wait for the
next chapter!

mozzi-girl chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
*shudder* that little girl creeped me out big time... Great start though! Really liked it!

- Molly
NiekaWow chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Ooooooo this is so interesting... It's original, but I hate how Mal is afraid of Nat, it's kind of heart breaking :( hmm... Maybe afraid isnt the right word.. Horrifyed, maybe? but I would be too if my friend "stabbed" me. Good on you for taking a break on Trying But Failing, you've worked really hard on it ;) I can't wait to see what happens next :D
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