That was a nice little one-shot. They got a little OOC near the end, but that is part of the beauty of PWP smut.
Thanks for writing.

They are both so cunning :)))

Will you transform it into a full story or you'll leave it as a one-shot? I missed reading something written by you so your little story was very welcomed. Thank you so much!

Oh. I'd say you are damned good at the PWP thing! YUMMY!

wow, this could totally turn into a multi-chapter fic... just saying... I loved it, it was really good :)

It was still good.

Loved it! You do PWP well!

Sad that this didn't take place in your 'CTS' world:(

Sad that the other prompts you owe aren't smutty:(

But the rest was beautifully done! Their indignation at being thought of as virgins, the banter, right on down to the sexin'.

But, you have opened a can of worms with that ending. Surely, you have another PWP in you to continue this? I mean, really! You left the door, figuratively and literally in the fic! LOL!, wide open for one last part.

He simply must show her more of his skills... And - someone MUST have heard her squealing... or did Crooks stand guard at the top of the stairs and not let anyone come up to investigate?

Well... I need a smoke after that. I want my very own Severus :(

I'm so sad this is only a one shot! I LOVED it! You did fabulously writing smut and the way it all fit together felt so true to character. If I beg will you write more?

I was wondering if they were EVER going to get around to shutting that door hehe - let the whole house hear hey? Loved it, thank you

I thought you did great:)

Loved it, as usual :D I hope we learn all about his other "tricks" :D

Well, I think these lemons were quite yummy and tasty. :D

i loved it i can this happening! lol great shot! thanks

Wow. I enjoyed this and I think you are rather good at the PWP. I loved the way you got their characters exactly right and the way you wrote it made it feel very real. Thank you for another wonderful gem.