Well. Well, well, well. What have we here. I have to admit, i threw my semantics Book through the room, as i read the announcment of the new story xD in normal circumstances i don't like PWP's either because of the lack of emotional development, but you have the privilege, that we know your Severus and Hermione from your other Stories. But i have to say this more confident and also perverse version of Severus is also really intriguing. More teaser for your new story, eh? I notice that you grow more confident with lemons (at least i think so). This one was in my opinion the best until now and really detailed. I loved Hermione so uninhibitted and as a 'screamer' that's suprisingly erotic. You get an extra point for an awesome crookshanks cameo. Also: Severus' voice. Again. Delicious.

i don't think emotional development is normally part of PWP actually XD and yet, you still pull it off amazingly

i loved that you had it as Hermione actually trying to trick Severus into her bed though, that was pretty brilliant ;)

You should watch an old video on YouTube from charlieissocoollike called "Charlie Reads Twilight." He has a very interesting opinion on the phrase "chuckled darkly." Also, you say you're not good with PWP, but I beg to differ. :)

That was amazing! I loved it. Snarky Severus and indignant Hermione.

Thanks for sharing.

Yay! Another one from Loten. Happy dance.

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Smutty smut with a mention of Mooby. XD

Personally, I think you did a fabulous job. It was a very entertaining premise, though I'm probably mostly tickled by 1. Ron's predictably poor performance and 2. The fact they did that with the door open. Lovely!