Lo único malo es que no hubo lemon

Sandy haired bot! Who thought he be a thot.

"can you not control your servants" mr malfoy said

i nearly fell out of my chair. moments before we witnessed malfoys servant not beeing under his control lmao
what a hypocrit

Great read, fun Bram Stoker style. Little gory, but highly reccommend!

knew an fanfiction author couldn't resist keeping to cannon vold ressurection no matter what.

It is too bad Harry did not call forth one of his Ancestor's weapons. Heck, it would have ben hilarious if he had somehow summoned the Sword of Gryffindor being whom and what he is.

Deeply bizarre

I don't like your author notes. The story is good though.

Hahaha

I know this is old dead and remade that died as well but I've got to say. The only reason Harry likes buck teeth Jones in this is because YOU! like her. If this Harry likes beautiful things then he wouldn't give Hermione the time of day until at least 4th year. Already seeing you make Harry an oc that changes his views when it's plot convenient, no wonder you remade this

Guessing no more to the story?

that was one of the best storys i EVER read.
short and perfect, thats how i like it.

Forst: AWESOME story!

Secondly, for the addem ambience... "Yes" in Romanian is "Da" (just like in russian. Romanian is an interesting mixture of Romantic and Slavic language sounds, for all that it is registred as a Romantic language.)

In context of the story, people can most likely guess the meaning, and you can always add it to the comment section.

It's not much, but it does add to the feeling of a story to use the actually language in a few words before making the convesation in 'translated language.' /itallic

Just a small tip. _

...also shows how amazing and perfect the story is when THAT is the biggest thing to nitpick on. Lol

So much useless retarded posturing with no action to back it up.

This author should learn a very simple thing. A bit of grandstanding during an unimportant situation is okay. But grandstanding during an important event and then the MC backing down just because Dumbledore told him to, is not good. That just portrayed him as a petulant child throwing a temper tantrum.

It's stupid.

Overall this was a very interesting piece. I enjoyed it and quite liked how you wrote Harry. However there were a few parts that I wondered why you followed canon so closely. One thing that left me confused is why Harry and Draco took Divination. It didn't really make sense with how intelligent they both are. I would have figured both would have taken Arithmacy and Ancient Runes along with Care of Magical Creatures. Also I was a bit perplexed with whole Ministry against Harry thing, unless he actually announced Voldemort's return. All we knew was that he told Dumbledore he was back. It honestly doesn't make sense for him to announce that except to Dumbledore since he knew Voldemort would be laying low. He's intelligent enough to keep his own council and has Rita Skeeter under his control. I was also curious to know if Harry got a regular supply of blood from Madam Pomfrey. She always seemed to have some for him. It would have made sense to get some regularly if he was able. Anyway I did enjoy the story even though I wish it hadn't followed canon so closely. At any rate I do hope you eventually continue the rewrite. I'm curious to see how it differs from this version.