|Reviews for Fifty Shades of the Moon|
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/10/2013
I just love McKenna and Galvin... Please do a story about them...JN
| Mommylady chapter 30 . 7/5/2013
Love this story and have followed it from the start. You just confused me BIG time with this chapter. Who is Swanson and Thresher?
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/3/2013
can you please write a sequel but this time focus more on gavin and mac
| pookiebear3 chapter 30 . 6/29/2013
Christian will always find a way
| wattle chapter 7 . 6/28/2013
Wow, I was re-reading and came across this chapter - it has changed completely from when I read it the first time, even crazier than before. Love it.
| Bella2325 chapter 30 . 6/28/2013
Please help I'm confused... This is one of my favorite stories and it can't end when I don't understand what is happening. Who did Christian call? Who is Thresher? What did I miss? And how could Allie be tied into the linc mess?
Also early in the chapter you wrote Lena jumped off Swanson's lap...did you mean Sawyer's lap?
| aabc chapter 30 . 6/28/2013
Oh ... Sounds like a sequel... Without the Grey's being the center of attention... Cool!
| Skgcsandra chapter 30 . 6/28/2013
Are u gonna write a sequel? We need more. Can't wait for the epilogue.
| icalyn chapter 30 . 6/28/2013
I truly hope this means there is going to be a sequel. This crazy ass story is one of my absolute faves. I love the characters so much and hope for more.
Great, great story. :)
| Maryfromabluestate chapter 30 . 6/27/2013
Wonderful chapter, although I must admit too that I was confused on who Swanson and Thresher were. ( Sawyer and Andre?). No mind, I intend to start rereading this one from the beginning anyway. Loved what Christian did to repay the McGovern sisters. Would love to see a McGovern sisters sequel!
| Mommylady chapter 30 . 6/27/2013
The sisters can't leave us, we NEED them. They give us funny drama and make us laugh. You HVE to bring them back to us.
| momalu chapter 30 . 6/27/2013
The only way I'm ok with this fabulous story coming to an end is there's a promise of your next one sometime in the future. You are way too talented not to continue spinning your tales! Your humor is astounding and adds an incredible dimension, as evident when one reads "I swear my sister could find an injured stray in a sealed bank vault." That's one of my personal favorites!
This was a great chapter pulling it all together. I've fallen in love all over again with Christian for his clever and "anonymous" way of paying these girls back for saving his love, his Ana. Buying the town, having a newfound interest in wool and becoming President of the effing Historical Society is hilarious! And yes, maybe Gavin gets weary traveling with the sisters, but your fans never do.
| wattle chapter 30 . 6/27/2013
Who is Thresher? I might have to go and reread, not that that will be a problem as this story is magnificent.
Oh I love CG for giving McKenna that peace. CG will always pay for what he believes in and the McKenna girls, well, they deserve it all and more. He did good.
Oh evil again to keep everyone on their toes.
| Bonitapplebumm chapter 30 . 6/27/2013
No no no don't end it , this is a got story and I love you writing style it mirrors my mind :D...I have made you one of my favorite authors so I can keep up with your beautiful mind...good luck with your future endeavors and we will be here to be your sounding board!
| Hard Pouncing chapter 30 . 6/27/2013
Top Best Lines Ever ... I swear my sister could find an injured stray in a sealed bank vault.
I am so sorry to see this end. I could read this for years and years. I hope your career as a professional writer takes off! If not, we will all be here waiting for you ...