Reviews for The Girl Who Slept For Several Centuries
Angel-Rei-chan1 chapter 5 . 10/4/2014
please continue !
... she is a sucubus right ? ( can't spell it , sorry )
lenalee you b*tch !
NightHunterDeath chapter 5 . 11/24/2013
I seriously want more, it was awesome!
NamikazeMia chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
love it! there aren't a lot of Female Allen fics!
EpikalStorms chapter 5 . 1/2/2013
Hahahahaha! Kanda-gay? Hahahahahaha!
SeikaDragon chapter 5 . 12/12/2012
I don't think that Ellen's confession really matter... only her if she will be con him forever
Ern Estine 13624 chapter 5 . 12/12/2012
interesting can't wait for more.;D
hollykaye chapter 4 . 12/8/2012
Great story please continue.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/6/2012
OMG you update KYAAAAAA . please i beg of u dnt leave me hanging that long :3 if u need ideas u know to ask .. so if u have writers block dnt forget about me urr FANNNN of this story KAY
SeikaDragon chapter 4 . 12/5/2012
mmm I wonder if they will found Kanda very soon or Allen finally will be confess her love
GreenDrkness chapter 4 . 12/4/2012
That last line was HIlarious
Keep on the writes
MercenaryCrime chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
great chapter

hope it'll be updated soon!
GreenDrkness chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
well ellen could be the Immortal of Time and they both like each other
No the guy shouldn't come back and Lenalee goes nuts trying to find Kanda but Lavi consoles her and then they get married
Keep on the writes
EpikalStorms chapter 3 . 11/5/2012
Answers to question:
Ellen is a person. Yup. An awesome person, but a person.
Yes, she does.
Yes. Yes he does.
Probably with lots of his buddies to take Ellen by force or something. Then Kanda swoops in all awesome like, and kicks their asses to kingdom come for messing with his Ellen. Then the men tell everyone that Kanda is staying with "the most beautiful girl in the world".
Lenalee seems like a high class bitch in this story, so I expect her to go very, very far.
That's that.
Write more soon!
fangirl12232 chapter 3 . 9/13/2012
i love ur story hey u should make a funny scene where kanda lands in ellen boobs by mistake or he touches her boobs but while diong and leenali found them like that and she slapped ellen and said mean things to her that made her cry and kanda looked at leenali with a glare and leenali slapped her and ran off to see if ellen alright if u need any clarification tell me
Ienzo chapter 3 . 9/13/2012
Story is still awesome and I like it. I still wish for longer chapters (especially since you appearently won't be updating as fast) but I can deal with it. Kanda and Ellen's relationship is moving pretty fast. They've only known each other for a week after all and she all ready kissed him, given I don't care in the long run but it's not very realistic and I fear it could have a negetive impact on the story. Making romance to fast is its own virsion of rushing and I don't think people like rushing. Right now it's not to bad though. Watch out for: (Note: This is advice. You haven't done these things.)
1. Rushing- Weither rushing through the actual story or pieces of it it gives less for the reader to enjoy and can lead to mistakes that could have been avoided otherwise.
2. OOCness- Characters being OOC is unavoidable in any story and can actually be a good thing. However OOCness such as whiny emo big baby Kanda (just an example) is unforgivable and the person should be brutely harmed.
Again I love the story and wish to see more and I hope I don't annoy you with my attempt at critic or attempted advice. If I do I am sorry. - Your Loyal Fan Ienzo
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