Reviews for The Darkness Concealed Inside |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Name: Knight Digimon Name: Grademon Personality: Calm and collected. Will attack if angered. Hates anything having to do with evil. Bio: He was an outcast his whole life. The result, of course, was he grew to be calm in all situations. He could even commit myrder and keep a straight face! He had a family that was murdered by evil digimkn. Special Attacks: Gigastick Lance, Raging Darkness |
![]() ![]() ![]() Name:Kimiko Iino Digimon:Lopmon Personality:Kind and respectful Gender:Female: BIO:She touched her digimon, a light shot out and transported them to the digital world. Special Attacks: Blazing Ice:Lopmon leaps into the air and quickly shoots small,crystal bolts that can hurt her enemy as well as freeze them. Lop Twister:Spins to form a tornado that she can throw |
![]() ![]() Best Digimon Story EVER! |
![]() ![]() Dude! really good story! hoping to read more! Blackwargreymon's boss! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :/ Y STORMHORSEMON NO BAD ASS?! It's supposed to represent ME! A bunch of Devimon couldn't stop me! I DEFEATED PYROSTARMON FOR GOODNESS SAKE! Oh well. Remember, Destiny is still in my head. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, though I think you have misunderstood Kurai's personality. He's suppose to be wise, not boastful. But it can't be helped, I guess. Kurai's personality'll have to stay like that in your fanfic. Well, enjoyed Ag's Digivolving into VictoryGreymon. I love that Digimon. -Emi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice...I've sent my form by PM. Well dj, or should I call you by your character name, DJ? XD Seriously, nice job though. I was entertained. You've read my fic so you know Stormhorsemon's details. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story! Hope to read more! :D BTW, when titling a story, it should be like this: "The Darkness Concealed Inside" Name: Kurai Digimon Name: Gaiomon Personality: Despite his intimidating looks, Kurai is a kind hearted Digimon that speaks with words before actions. He is wise beyond normal, and usually speaks as a mentor that teaches things to those that need to be taught. Bio: Before Digivolving into Gaiomon, it was once DexDorugamon; a Digimon that Digivolved through death. Seeking nothing but power from other Digimon, it had hunted DigiCores to Digivolve. But before that happened, a Magnamon X named Kisenax had stopped DexDorugamon from causing more chaos. Kisenax used Magna Blaster to stop DexDorugamon, causing him to revert back into a Digimon called Ryudamon. After that, Kisenax took Ryudamon as an apprentice, and renamed him Kurai. As Kurai grew, he eventually became Gaiomon the Wise King (he’s not actually a king though). Attacks: Rinkazan: Uses its Kikurin swords to leave behind eerie tracks of light which tears apart anything that touches them. Gaia Reactor: Concentrates all the energy within the atmosphere, and then detonates them. Rinkageki: Combines the two Kikurin swords, which causes the eerie tracks of light to converge all at once, allowing it to attack distant enemies. -Emi |