Reviews for What Lies Beneath
Guest chapter 35 . 7/3/2013
I've been a fan of recue for years and this was the most perfect story ever, a truly great ending, bravo to you
asdfanfic chapter 30 . 12/3/2012
Wow. This is amazing, PUH-LEASE say you'll write more?! I was seriously thinking that there was gunna be an unhappy ending, for example, when mac kidnapped heidi and they were in the cave, and he lay on top of her and held her down ect, i thought it was like an unwritten 'rape' and, i was expecting there to be an unhappy turn of events at the end where heidi finds out she's pregnant... then realises it's mac's :O hahaha i guess that'd be a bit too far fetched, otherwise this was awesome! Please keep writing :D
daniandan-TehWolfyBlake chapter 30 . 11/20/2012
Excellent story. I always thought of Mack as being on of the good guys.
Either way, I love reading this.
latias1999 chapter 23 . 10/31/2012
I'm loving this story i can't wait for the next chapter. hope dean and heidi will be okay
rafa number one fan chapter 18 . 10/17/2012
great chapter my eyes started to fill up wih tears when jordan was giving his wee speech :)
sez101 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
AWESOME love it
MissShawnaAlice chapter 3 . 9/17/2012
Sneaky Mac! What has he got planned?!
Hope to see you on the forum - I'm the admin there.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Xxletgoxx chapter 3 . 9/16/2012
Again amazing, I feel soo sad that Heidi is blaming herself for this
Xxletgoxx chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
Ooh I love the second chapter, Im already starting to think what might have happened to Jordan. There is another website you can post on that heaps of people do, search rescue special ops forum just sign up, wait to be accepted and activated and post away, really good site
MissShawnaAlice chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
I'm loving this! I thought I reviewed the first chapter, but forget to press 'POST'. Silly me :s

I hardly think this is the end of Heidi's troubles - I wonder where things will lead her.

I rarely have thought of Mac in this way, but this raging style seems to also suit :)

Looking forward to the next chapter!
rafa number one fan chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
please update soon :)
Xxletgoxx chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Amazing writing for your first rescue fan fiction, i love the story and I'm excited to see another chapter