Reviews for What If?
okokokokokokokokokook chapter 2 . 9/16/2016
um this is really good
therunningpen chapter 2 . 8/10/2014
;'( so sad there is only two chapters! this is literally what i have been searching for... for all of eternity... in my dreams this story has been calling for me to find it and read it...

just like mamarou and his moon princess!? he..he.. he..

anywho, you seriously have flawless writing, clear thoughts, and an extremely interesting character development/plot here.
I would love to see that next chapter...but alas its been 2 years since an update...guess I will just have to see the rest of the story in my dreams. XD
GraphicsChyk chapter 2 . 5/15/2014
Oh please continue this story. Really like this twist and want to read more.
nicole.leyda chapter 2 . 1/3/2014
OMG I love your story I hope you continue this story because when I read it I immediately like it
SailorSea chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
Wow this story is great but you haven't updated in sooo long. Plz continue this I really love it!
sparkle-glitter-and-fly-on chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
Plz. Plz. Plz. Update. And if you know any other stories like this plz tell me.
megan chapter 2 . 1/2/2013
please update please please update
Stellade chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Really good update soon please:)
Usako2456 chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
Please please continue is sooo good _
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Please continue writing this has been too long :(
Guest chapter 2 . 10/21/2012
Please continue writing this story, I love the plot and where its going! -
wait chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
What about Motoki? He was also Usagi's friend, and at times acted like an elder brother to her. :)

He should be listed as a friends along with Naru and Umino.
Nessa671 chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
Please update soon.
xx Twilight Princess xx chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
Interested to see what will happen next :D
KeganHorse chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
You are very good at writing. I am really enjoying this story and cannot wait for you to post more :D
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