|Reviews for The Unnexpected Visitor|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
| genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
| DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
amazing story, my respects!
| jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
| NXNJR7 chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
are u not making second chapter
| Kakashi-is-my-daddy chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
I was listening to the song 'booty call' by Ke$ha while reading this XD
| AJGuardian chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Yeah...well I think this could have been better. Much better.
| Slytherin's Pimp chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
no sequel? no unplanned pregnancy?
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
| Rixxell Stryfe chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Good story man. Of course I really liked the hints at Sasuke wanting to bed Mikoto as well and wonder if a sequel may come out of this that somehow ends up with mom swapping and or threeways between the two boys and both respective mothers.
Still the citrus was pretty well done and I do hope you may bring another in the future. Thanks for writing:)
| Takai153 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Great lemon. But you occasionally switched from 3rd to 1st person here and there. Loved that you kept the stockings and boots on. I look forward to seeing more in the future. And in the future it'd be great if you could have some oral and anal instead of just normal sex; using shadow clones would be great too.
| Ash chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Great story. Better grammar & sort out you point of views next time.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
The grammer needs some work also it switches from first person to third person at random intervals sometimes within paragraph or sentance.
| adamxero chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
I love Mikoto she's so naughty...you should carry this on it has potential plus I want to see some more NarutoxMikoto.